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  1. FeverDream

    Writing Prompt T-Rex reincarnated as a Demon Lord! (How the hell did I come up with this…)

    That could be an interesting idea! Idk, if done well I guess I could read it
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    Looking for Things to Review

    Hey! You actually just gave me feedback from my first chapter in another thread, but I would love a more in depth review if you may
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    Holy moly! Unexpected!

    Congrats man!! I hope I can get there one day
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Woww, thanks! This really motivates me to keep writing. I really liked how the first chapter ended up, so it's great to see I'm not the only one. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story if you decide to keep reading it!
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hey, what's up? If you are still doing it, I would love to hear your opnions on my first chapter!
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    Wuxia by a western author

    Oh, not totally remove the chinese culture, but mix things a little. Keep enough so that the core of what makes a wuxia story is still there, but don't worry too much of getting every detail right. Do your on interpretation of how some things would work.
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    Wuxia by a western author

    Yeah it's kinda new, but basically it's about books that focus on the progression of the MC. So a lot of trainings, learning new techniques, finding rare weapons, those kinda of things. Really cool Yeah it is, and it's awesome!
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    Wuxia by a western author

    I believe it can work, and work well, IF you focus more on the cultivation part of the story instead of Wuxia in general. Have you ever heard about "progression fantasy"? It's a genre of books that have some really cool cultivation stories. You should check it out.
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    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    That was my exact reaction LOL
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Man, I really appreciate your feedback! It's nice seeing your conclusions, seeing how the things I write are getting to the mind of the readers. You gave me really useful tips! It's true that for now, there isn't any plot to the story, only a interesting premise. My idea for now was to try to...
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    How do I add a signature to my messages?

    That was really helpful! If I may bother you a little more, I'm having a little trouble putting the image. It says I need to put the link for it, but it doesn't seem to work
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    What Good Thing Happened Today?

    I got two new readers :)
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    How do I add a signature to my messages?

    Hey, guys. This may be a dumb question but I'm new here and I just can't find out how to do it. Could someone enlighten me please? I'll light a candle, meditate and concentrate my energy in honor of the name of anyone who helps. Never understimate the power of a random dude whispering your...
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    Recommendations any stories about Hive Minds if you could kindly

    It's still just at the beginning, but this is very much the premise of the story that I've been writing! If you want to check it out, here's the link: H.I.V.E I love Hive Minds and have a lot of ideas for this story, so it should be a lot of fun
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Hello! I'm a new writer and have been curious to know if I'm doing good so far, so I would very much appreciate some feedback! Here's the story: H.I.V.E
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