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Under a great load of study, I am about to die again.

Thanks for the feedback. I had made some cleaning and adding afterwards.

Judge one right? I think I actually don't judge or even if I do, I do comparisons first. I compair myself with them and keep my opinions to me. The people who live around me always judge me as they like and throw their opinions towards me. But the funny thing is I am definitely not like they...

Yes. Or u can use another one.

I've read bl cultivation novels though. But not that long. The highest had 700 chapters and the others most probably ended at 200-300. As I mainly liked some emotional stuffs then, I had skipped the political ones

First let me cry(in depression) then help me die(out of high sugar) I like the combination the most

Oh, but that is also I am saying, they gave me review based on it and before going further I am here. I got ur meaning though. Thanks

I don't know if my world building sucks or something but I am totally sure my characters aren't doing anything unrealistic. But thanks for suggesting.

I mean they said they couldn't feel connected with that world. In short 'couldn't feel it'. It's GB. So they shouldn't act how they would before, right?

So as the title goes, from the feedback I got for my first story- I am lacking in relating. I can't relate my readers with my story. So I went back and do some cleaning and adding. But even so, I need some tips or tricks to make my readers feel related with my story. So here I am- Please help...

Arrogant and me? Nah, I was hell lot nervous. Seems like I am of different species.

With my capacity I would like to stay at the first option. I am very loyal u know~

? But. I can open the chapter with the link also.. why is it like that

What is it? Why?

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/435714-how-should-i-call-you/chapter/435725/ here is the first chapter of my very first writing. Please give me some reviews as to what to add and what not if u have the time to.

If the story is of my type that can hook me I would like to read hundreds of chapters of course. I think that's just the case.

Bro the first one is my crush character Lan Zhan from bl novel grandmaster of demonic cultivation and the other one isLan Zhan's love Wei Ying.

Just pure nonsense with Lan Zhan and Wei Ying accompanying me, lol

At my area the weather is super perfect for cuddling under quilt with my arm pillow. But I was thinking of calling Hanguang Jun to cuddle with me, so the story stood, Squirrel: it's so damn cold here, aiyo Hanguang Jun let's cud----- Yiling laozu: so you've gotta death wish, huh? Squirrel: By...

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/435714-how-should-i-call-you/chapter/435725/ ok then can u check mine please and then review afterwards?