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  1. Gastic

    Is my use of third person good or bad?

    Is my story that I just started after coming back on this site for so long decent in the POV? I’m thinking more of putting third person rather than first and can even switch between both of them fairly well. Tell me how you feel about the wording. I want to know if it’s decent or shit awful...
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    Why is every almost fantasy adventure story with a female MC gender bender?

    Idk but you’re right! I tried to make other genres on this sight but nobody liked them. It’s more of like a follow these stories or nobody will read them aside from a select few.
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    Fantasy Adventure That Isn't an Isekai or a FanFic

    I guess my story fits the description. “Birth of the immortal stormruler dragon” It’s not an isekai or system one but it does have a unique universe. Here’s the synopsis “ Not many creatures are born into the world intelligent. Dragons an extinct race destroyed by slayers of immense power have...
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    Recommendations Novels in which mc is reincarnated inside a novel

    I dont know if you'd like it or are searching for professional novels or whatever but I wrote one called "A novel villain" synopsis: Ryan wakes up to discover he is isn't who he used to be. He had become a villain in a novel he read in his free time. Realizing this he decides to train himself...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    No you’re not
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    Recommendations Adventure novels?

    It’s not one of my most popular stories but I put a lot of work into it.
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    Recommendations Adventure novels?

    Extremely shameless plug but my story is adventure. The main main is reborn into a family of assassins, he is the villain of the story, the villain has to become strong and overcome his fate while also maintaining his villain status to encourage the heroine to gain enough strength to hunt him...
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    What factors in a bully the bullies story with superpowers involved in a modern setting?

    Yeah sorry I guess I didn’t mean to get aggressive I just wanted to point out that all sides are flawed. Sorry if I got rude I have a shitty temper
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    What factors in a bully the bullies story with superpowers involved in a modern setting?

    I don’t favor trump or any of the politics currently running all I said was that it politics each have their own side. Each sees you as wrong bush sexually assaulted women and Biden gropes children. Each side has flaws and I just pointed that out.
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    What factors in a bully the bullies story with superpowers involved in a modern setting?

    I don’t care who you were talking about neither am I butthurt, nothing I said was Favoring politics either, each side sees each other wrong. If we’re going to talk about refuting shit back your claims you inbred, what conspiracy theories and orange man, what have they done and what leads you to...
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    What factors in a bully the bullies story with superpowers involved in a modern setting?

    I would actually have to disagree with you on that America is a land made for the people, there is so much opportunity to go from rags to riches. America is made so that anybody can get a chance and you not leading America is on you, if you’re not rich it’s because you made the wrong choices or...
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    What factors in a bully the bullies story with superpowers involved in a modern setting?

    I think what you really need to show the distortions of a character is to give them a true reason. They need a justification for their actions such as a fear or gain, with each passing moment their ideals become corrupted by their actions. Bullies aren’t born from nothing they’re made from an...
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    Author's urge to Post Too Early

    i also make up the chapters in my head as i post almost daily that way readers can tell its still creative because the shit that comes from my mind spits all types of crazy.
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    Author's urge to Post Too Early

    i basically feel the same as you do when it comes to seeing readers, with me i feel like a meth head without his hourly dose of crack if i can't respond to people in the comments of my story. I post when i feel inspiration or happy enough to do it, if i force myself to post or come up with a...
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    How do you come up with funny stuff for your story?

    it depends on how and where you need it. Satire depending on the situation, self awareness can also work but in few circumstances. I believe it just depends on the tone of comedy if you're trying to have a comedic undertone to something dark or somewhere where there shouldn't be comedy don't try...
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    Your character's reaction to having to smash a jar of peanut butter in front of whoever they care about

    ok but its like super dry peanut butter so it won't even feel good
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    Your character's reaction to having to smash a jar of peanut butter in front of whoever they care about

    if they can't fuck it(lack of penis) or are female just do some foreplay then
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    Your character's reaction to having to smash a jar of peanut butter in front of whoever they care about

    Ok so your character is out of options and overpowered they have to fuck a jar of peanut butter... or jelly and if they don't they get their ass stretched by a very large paint roller. There is no blazing through this they either fuck the peanut butter or get fucked ass stretched by an...
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    Your character were asked to sub a porn movie in their mother language.

    My character would join that bitch as a pizza delivery guy and not even fuck he'd just deliver a pizza and be done. He'd probably subtitle it to a cheesy step sis porn though or something completely unrelated.
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    To the isekai writers, I have a question.

    No, but even if i did fuck them kids.
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