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A quick note that I am here, just had a lot going on and started falling behind the queue, sorry about that. :sweating_profusely: This post will likely turn into Lire's review after I'm done, IRL can be ruthless at times. So there are about six on the list? Guess there's work to do.

Hello there, sorry for the late reply. You didn’t specify so you get my uneducated rambles here in the thread. I also notice that the story disappeared while I was writing this (I draft over days if I don’t have the time), so uh, part of it might be inaccurate due to me going off my memory. The...

Hello, sorry for the late reply. Since you didn’t specify you get my review here. I read up to Chapter 4 of volume 2 at the time of this post. As per my usual, I want to touch on the synopsis first. While it achieves most of the basics, I feel like it misses a specific detail or two that can...

Hello there, sorry for the late reply, I actually missed you on my first pass. You also didn’t specify so you get my uneducated rambles here. I read up to three chapters at the time of this post. In my opinion, the best way to describe this novel is ‘raw’: - The novel will switch from first...

One of those moments where me not knowing Jojo makes this topic look like a drunken fever dream.

A metric ton of variables will decide your overall view count, and unless you're doing this to grow a writing job or something, the best answer is to put your best foot forward, post, and find out. Sailus is right that one of the biggest contributors is whether or not your story aims for the...

Hello, I was able to find time so I decided to get to the feedback list again. I finished about ten chapters at the time of this review. I’ll be honest here, I was frequently confused while reading, so I don’t know how helpful my advice is going to be this time. For the synopsis, I’d say that...

I agree with a couple of people on RR that you could at least archive the story instead of wiping it out of existence. Even if you do an extensive rewrite there might be elements in the original you can scavenge. Or you can use it as a reference to see how far you've come after you make new...

Traditional Fantasy alone is a harder sell in web novel spheres, there are a couple of reasons why in my opinion: - You're up against people like Brandon Sanderson, lol. Web Novel readers don't tend to read fast food exclusively; there are plenty who still read traditional books too. So it's...

Hello, you didn’t specify so you get my uneducated rambles here. I’m trying to clean my list while I have time so please forgive any grammar errors on my end. I read all available chapters at the time of this post. Synopsis first. Most of it is quite decent and to the point. While I’d prefer a...

You're welcome, glad to see my feedback helped in some way. If it is, then I'd like to point at my reasoning still. While you had the intent to go for that atmosphere, always consider the consequences of what showing such things can do long term. If they still went with that idea despite...

Hello. Since you didn’t specify you get my uneducated ramblings here. I read the one chapter available at the time of this post. Well okay, half of the chapter. I’ll explain as I go. I want to talk about the synopsis first. While you mentioned a lot about your concept, you failed to mention...

Hello, sorry for the late review. I’ll post it here since you gave me the option. What I meant about ‘SH’ was ScribbleHub itself instead of the forum, for future reference. The first thing I want to get to is your first paragraph: ‘Lila Doyle wiped the sweat from her brow with the back of her...

Again, sorry for being late. I read both chapters available at the time of review. You didn't specify where you wanted it so I'll put it here. So I guess this is an episodic sort of story with a rather villainous protagonist. While I don’t have much to go off of, the way you structured both...

I mean, yeah, Harem. The thing is there are other sites like RR or Amazon that got the other fixes if I want to read something else. I might add something that isn't harem on this site but those tend to be accidental finds rather than deliberate searches.

Hello, sorry about being late. I read all chapters at the time of this review. I guess it should be mentioned that while I’m most likely not the target audience for this story, I do have experience with the tropes. I’ve seen or read novels/comics like ‘Under The Oak Tree’, ‘Marriage And Sword’...

Hello, since you didn’t specify I’ll put my uneducated rambles here. I also read all chapters at the time of this post. Now first off, I will say that my lolicon danger sensor went on yellow alert every so often, but ultimately I gave you a cautious pass based on the rest of the piece. The mild...

Sorry I’m late, busy as usual. Here are my uneducated rambles. I read both chapters available at the time before posting this feedback. I didn’t touch on much with prologues regarding most others but I decided this time to single you out in particular. Now your prologue isn’t criminal or...

I can't give much of a response since I didn't get that far, but if you started referencing the past as the main story goes after that big backstory, I'd say it was a step in a better direction. The thing is that the giant backstory still exists, and I don't know what you want to do with it, but...