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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/952382/theend-the-final-planet/ I would like any kind of criticism or feedback

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/952382-theend-the-final-planet/chapter/952401/ Its my first ever story written

I am not sure if I should give reasons, i thought it was the reader job to find reasons to read (I am not good with marketing)

Air, water, fire, earth, nature, eletric (or energy), metal, light, darkness and limit Those being the principal From then derivating every other sub-element (like plasma, gravity, etc), i think darkness is good for me

I would Love criticism and feedback of any kind https://www.scribblehub.com/series/952382/theend-the-final-planet/

This is the first chapter, the more the story progress they get longer (Its my first time writting the story i am making and i am not native english speaker) any feedback criticism is good, also first day and time on this site- ahem (Gayoul)-*cough* "How... how could you do that to him... how...