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Yards is more a measurement of distance than height. Something is X yards away/long

Power wolf, Sabaton, chase noseworthy and a whole host of various metal covers.

One of the guys in my basic training platoon was offended by foul language. The DS told him "this is the infantry nobody understands what the fuck you are saying if you dont fucking swear, you God damned, peice of shit bitch." It was an enlightening experience.

Daily life when not actively fighting is mostly: guard shifts maintain equipment eat Sleep Recreation (cards, reading, letters) In that order of importance. Security comes first then making sure your gear is good before you get to take care of yourself.

You could change it to a siren that used sound attacks like corny one liners that don't fit the action or really horrible dad jokes instead of the traditional types of attacks

Is the characters history or previous living condition important to the story and how he develops? If so, then a little backstory is probably a good thing.

Fox: A creature with cat software installed into dog hardware. They also appear around the world so they are pretty common creatures but not so common as domestic animals. I think that semi-familiar status along with having general behavior or characteristics makes them an approachable creature...

Its one mind that has multiple bodies. They don't act independently and there seems to be a built in limit so they don't wander

You could make a list of what is and isn't. Maybe you could call it prose and cons?

I would say find something that is moderately annoying and mention it every time the character is around. Does he talk with his hands a lot, does he chew gum loudly is he always making puns and innuendo. In the case of consuming media, have him be the snob. "Ugh, I hate how they changed this...

Read the last chapter you wrote and ask yourself "what happens exactly after that?" Then write that answer on the next chapter. Even if its a couple sentences, its a starting point I found POV shifts have helped me but I don't know if your story has those

" you looked like someone just bought out your politicians" "This is almost as bad as when the children in my factory unionized" "The mules swallowed the bags so they all leaked. This is going to hurt my q3"

Thanks! I'll keep it on mind

Passing reference at most. He isn't even an introduced character at this point. Lol

In the chapter I just scheduled i reference Odin being a necromancer and his whole multiple name thing being to gain power from other peoples confusion