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  1. lumiel

    Did I messed up, denying the invitation to be granted [System] ?

    In my opinion, every "system" concept that got injected to fiction stories always server their own purposes. So the question of will rejecting the system will be good or bad, depends on the system's nature itself. Perhaps I'll provide some system's nature from any works that I've read...
  2. lumiel

    What Made You Start Writing, And I Guess Get Into Books

    Tbh, it's actually an idea when me and a friend were still in our adolescent phase. He said that "Hey, what about we make a manga where I draw and you made the story?" Yes, it's because we're influenced with Bakuman manga. Tho I only read a few chapters of it hahaha. So I started to write...
  3. lumiel

    How many words do you usually write in a single chapter?

    I don't have any Patreon or any third-party funding sites. But, I'll just write around 1000-ish or a little bit more. For me, it's more like a hobby, so I did it during my spare time. It's around 1-3 hours to write that 1000 words tho. Or I continue to write it tomorrow after work so it can...
  4. lumiel

    Editing Need Some Advice on Rewrites

    I'm also agree that you should start it fresh. Just treat your previous posted works as a draft or beta chapter that supposed to be edited later into much much better stuff later. You can also treat your previous posted stories as lore material, which can be used later if you want.
  5. lumiel

    Help on Litrpg Portal Webnovel

    Maybe more engaging phrases should do it, for example: 'Witness the grand adventure of a human child in order to take down a God, along with his epic encounter, romance, and battle!' Oof. I think my suggestion is super cliche. Sorry about that.
  6. lumiel

    Help on Litrpg Portal Webnovel

    Hello, I've read your prologue for now (since there's only prologue atm) I think it's interesting enough, but a repeated word about how a sound effect should be heard is kinda distracting the flow. Maybe to change it into a short description is quite nice. (but then again, it's my opinion) A...
  7. lumiel

    Use Picrew for your Covers

    Oof. I just realized that my grammar is wrong. Sorry about that. What I really meant is: This is better than stealing pictures from Pixiv
  8. lumiel

    Use Picrew for your Covers

    This is a very good post. It's better to just steal a pic from pixiv tbh, haha. I'll try to look more on this Picrew site
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