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  1. FatElf

    Is there any proofreading website worth paying for?

    You can use https://hemingwayapp.com/ to check for passive voice, adverbs and complicated sentences. If you are willing to work in return for the own review of your work, you can always try www.scribophile.com. Scribophile is intended for authors to critique each other's work, and they are...
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    It's over 10,000!!!

    Congratz! Keep those words flowing!
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hey, thanks for this thread. I'll leave mine here as well. It was a silly experiment turned into story: (I was working on how to write a good first paragraph, then ended up going with the first three chapters before I stopped). There are a few things on the first chapter I still want to edit...
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    Predestination Abilities (and why it’s a garbage troupe for lazy writers)

    Oh, those ideas are nice. I'm doing something similar. The novel I'm working on has a system, but it is mostly a tracker of things, and not a granter of almighty abilities. LitRPG can be fun, to write and read, but it needs work. Often times authors just add stuff that makes no sense, or the...
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    What is your favorite type of villain, and why?

    Villains that aren't villains at all. Just have a different perspective than the MC.
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