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    My 10+ Rule of Writing

    Waking up adds nothing in your first scenario, in fact its even worse because you're putting the reader in media res which is not entirely good for a story because you're basically giving the reader context-less action. The second example you give still doesn't add anything to waking up because...
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    My 10+ Rule of Writing

    rule 7 and 10 are the most important on this list. please put them in bold because people need to get it through their thick skulls.
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    Using "." or [ ] in dialogues?

    change to use " " any novel that uses silly methods of dialogue is an instant dropped for me.
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    Looking for Things to Review

    This sounds super interesting! Do you mind reviewing my story Progressive Detective the Q? Its linked in my signature. I love to hear what others have to say about my story.
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    How Would You Review Your Own Story?

    Uhh I view my stories as untapped potential? I like them a lot but can't get over the feeling that no one will understand what I'm trying to convey with the setting, tone, and atmosphere of my story. Often I cut out pieces and try to make things simple to understand otherwise it'd read like a...
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    How do you manage writing & drawing?

    Write a lot then release one chapter a week and during that week I focus on drawing.
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Title: Progressive Detective the Quandary Premise: A detective mystery novel set in a world with magic however magic is outlawed by the government so its not used by common folk. Only criminals violate said law and the most notable one who does is named Soap who wants to capture two children...
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    Tridetect all art thread

    I don't really have a place to showcase all the art I do so I'm making my own lil thread here to show off all the stuff I made for my stories as well as my inspirations and mindset when creating. For now I'll show off stuff from Progressive Detective the Q since that's what I'm currently working...
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    Games Finished Recently? Or Are Currently Playing?

    Playing through neptunia rebirth 3 and wild arm 5 currently. I'm probably gonna replay wild arms 4 since its such an amazing game imo.
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    Writing How to clear loopholes when adding too many side characters?

    this 'kill your characters' mentality is lazy. There are a million of other things you can have your side character do beside being dead. Something simple like them having a job which can explain their absence. they don't need to be in the MC vicinity to be actively doing something
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Guess I've give this a shot, since my synopsis is still kinda up in the air for me. It's hard for me to describe down my story tones in an quick and entertaining way Synopsis: Turmoil brews in Japan when a mysterious man attacks seemingly random parts in Osaka. A lone individual joined a local...
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    Are you in top 25% of inteligent people.Why do you think so.(experiences,otherCallingYouInteligent/dumb,habbits,intrests,success/failure in something)

    My intelligence is unrivaled, my smarts can only be compared to only the most famous philosophers. I am very big brain
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    Writing Prompt Main character or not

    sounds interesting. I'll add it to my list of ideas since im too busy to be writing side story stuff right now
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    Perhaps I will go on hiatus and finish book one

    your entire post reads like a cope
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    Perhaps I will go on hiatus and finish book one

    boohoo get over it. There are well crafted stories out there that don't even get read on this site. Such is the environment of a writing site, especially this one where everyone is trying to get attention and fame for 5 seconds
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    Writing Style

    I plot most of the story out first. Though sometimes minor details don't make the cut due to lack of time or its not fleshed out enough to be mentioned.
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    Username and Avatar

    I wanted a cool pen name everyone could recognize. Something akin to the legendary suda51 who inspires me greatly. So I came up with tridetect (short for triple detective) which is kind of based on the first story of my progressive series. It sounds like tri-ace which is a favorite game company...
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    The gtreat author mashup

    guess ill enter with the main character of my story, Mark Faultim. He's a gun wielder that can ricochet bullets using his mind as well as some other things later on but nothing crazy op.
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