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Thanks for the detailed feedback. It's very encouraging! As for this good question, I shall simply use this image as my reply:

Thanks for the feedback. Initially, I couldn't wrap my head around this because I write as my head narrates. All the AI I asked said I mix past and present, no no. Then I went to Reddit to ask real people and they said it mattered. Now you tell me the same too. That means this is a real issue...

So far I can only distinguish ChatGPT generated stories. CGPT tends to use short, punchy sentences with repetitions. Oh yeah, I totally forgot about the endash. There was a time when Microsoft Word or LibreOffice Writer could automatically correct my dashes to either one or them. But seriously...

What do you think of em dashes in a novel's text? Personally, I find em dashes quite stylistic. It adds variety to the punctuations we already know: periods (.), commas (,), question (?) and exclamation marks (!), colons (:), semicolons (;) and the simple dash (-). A paragraph with multiple...

Alright. I've been sitting with my first three chapters for a long time now. I feel like I'm ready to ask for feedback now What do you think of the story's hook and pacing, the world building, and the realism of Herald and Natalie? (Like, how real are they?)...

A portrait of Herald and Nathan in mirror image. Couldn't really capture the '100% identical vibe because I can't really do 'vertical mirror' like on a tablet'. Graphite on Rough Paper, scanned with PDF app on smartphone. Tools used: Pentel Sharplet 0.5, Pilot Shaker 0.7, generic 2B pencil...

The scene from Chapter 5: One of Us, Heraldry: Sapphire Among Vines.

Wow... An artist who can draw authentic eastern anime, western comic and copy paste his/her own drawing (the torso is completely off) into an AI piece. ...I'm just an amateur artist, thus my understanding is that each artist have their own style. Even if they try to cross over into foreign...

Hello everyone. For those who are bored enough to read my nonsense, allow me to waste your time: I woke up yesterday and logged in to SH, and was surprised/shocked to see that my own story is in my reading list. That's odd... I just said I wouldn't, but there it is. I don't drink. I don't do...

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. It's nice. ? I've won't put my story in my reading list. I choose to face the truth bravely ?. Unfortunately... An "economic reader bubble" has been blown for me. ?

Rebuilding from ashes and filling in a void left by another as a replacement. Also, it's not about how something began, but what it grows into.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll sit with it for a while.

Hey, guys. I'd chosen to title my story [Heraldry: The Sapphire Among Vines]. Initally, I thought it sounded cool, rolls of the tongue nicely, and since my MC is called Herald, I find it a good wordplay. Thing is, there is nothing in my story that has anything to do with the actual meaning of...

I got my first rating!

Dream of Sapphire becoming an anime made by Studio Ghibli. :blob_aww:

Hmm... This is odd. My artwork isn't appearing. Perhaps it's too large a file. ? No big. Here's the link instead. Read my short comic strip on Reddit instead.

Do you put your own stories in your own reading lists? I realized I can do that, and give even it five stars. But I haven't done that cuz I feels weird. And I also found out if you visit your own story page, the system counts it as a view.

Writer's block---!! Okay, time for a break and pick up the pencil. Now working on a short comic strip, a reverse Isekai with my childhood anime! I haven't added the dialogue and stuff yet, just doing the line work.