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Currently trying to get as many opinion as possible, so if you're fine with BL, yes please :blob_hide: [QT] Loving an Alien Isn’t That Bad at All

I'm not an expert on description myself, but if I may pitch in some thoughts as a reader, I think the shift from action to description was not very smooth to read. It breaks the flow of the image in my head. Maybe try slipping the description that matters the most in the action—like the blunt...

No, I don't have that kind of superpower. There is a fairly large gap between each one :blob_sweat: I didn't even post anything last year from a slump

Yeah, maybe you're right. But I just can't hold myself back when I think of an idea even if I will end up abandoning them most of the time :blob_no:

Maybe repetitive then…? There's just something about it that keeps bothering me, but I don't know what, so I don't know how to fix it orz

0 - white - blank 1 - red - winner 2 - blue - comfort, balance, evenness 3 - yellow - not sure why 4 - purple - my favorite number, my favorite color 5 - black - middleness, neutral, the savior of odd numbers (I don't know why, but 5 is the most handsome number for me) 6 - orange - fun (likes to...

If you're fine with BL (non-harem, non-smut), I would love to have a stone feedback on my latest story: [QT] Loving an Alien Isn’t That Bad at All I keep having a nagging feeling that my writing is becoming too mechanical and it's giving me headaches…

BL...?

Will I finish my current WIP in 2 months? 49.

Romance is my fantasy Fantasy is my romance

If I can give my two cents, I think when in MC thoughts, it's fine to just use the terms she was used to before instead of the tribe's variants for smooth reading, and use tribe terms when she verbally talks. You can also make her fumble and mix her words when she talks because her subconscious...

Maybe because I've only been rereading stories I know lately, I haven't encountered an AI story. Can anyone give me an example? Is it difficult to discern?

I think the best way is to use the supporting characters. If it's comedy, maybe they can use kind of like a tsukkomi or comment on something that doesn't make any sense in their world but makes a lot of sense for the readers. Like, semi-breaking the fourth wall? If it's not comedy, describing...

I went through a joker phase during my high school year (no, not Batman Joker. Like, I'm a joke and I take everything as a joke phase). Makes my high school year somewhat easier cuz even when I accidentally did something embarrassing, everybody thinks it's nothing out of the ordinary. Well, in...

kanji will bring me to my grave

Ah… I see… Thank you for answering. Let me just cry in the corner orz

For those who enjoy sports or psychological anime, or anime in general really, do you know this baseball manga called One Outs? The anime was released in 2008 so it's kind of old. I've been rewatching it for god knows how many times, and I've reread the manga twice, but for a long time, I always...

Irrational

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My suggestion, glaze over the other stuff in the room just enough to give the readers a picture then hyperfocused on the object in the center to give a sense of overwhelming presence. Like when in romance novels, the moment the main love interest steps inside, other characters become potatoes...