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What I mean by weird is that they'll act out of character or even change personalities after the confession. Thanks for the advice though!

How do you write a romance after the confession? I've read a few stories where after the confession and the main couple ends up together, their interactions become odd and out of character, and act completely different from before they actually got together. Is it because it's harder to write...

Fantasy. A mess of a mash between everything the 13 y.o MC thought was cool at the time. He points this out a lot. e.g Wuxia, generic isekai world

Since I have no idea how to write stuff, imma ask strangers on the internet. So, I'm trying to write a comedy/satire on the isekaied op harem protagonist. He recovers memories of his past life after getting a concussion from a tsundere and realizes that he reincarnated into a trashy harem novel...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/111431/why-being-a-op-isekaid-harem-protagonist-is-not-that-great/ A satire on why harem troupes end badly for the protagonist. He got isekaied into a terrible story he wrote when he was 13.

Yes, although it is a bit tiring on the wordy bits. I would suggest breaking up the sentences and removing the unecessary adjectives. A few long and wordy sentences are a bit tiresome to read. Try cutting a little unecessary description out. Smushing it repeatedly in grammarly helps. I've...

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try and write a better one. Yes.

196 Words Word: Stick My body rigid against the frozen ground. The emptiness stretching above the forest. Those scampering up the hillside. I watched them. Watched the figures, so alive, so... What did they have that I didn't? What right did they have to take me? I envied them. Feeling empty...

e.g. He was determined Maybe there'd be a heirachy, depending on how many words. Maybe people were decieved. Maybe they were illiterate.

Hi! This is my first piece of writing. It's the prologue for my story. I would love some criticism. It's about a fantasy world Not really JRPG, but more traditional, more resembling the middle ages. The white abyss stared at him. He stared at it back. Empty. Intimidating. Devoid of...

I would say above average protagonist is alright, as long there are clear limitations and flaws. Perhaps a certain power might bug out when he's stressed or confused A interesting character is your priority. Perhaps try worldbuilding a little. If it's set in medieval times, which medieval...

I don't know which to feel bad for, your hand or the table :LOL:

It's interesting enough, although I think proofreading, and repeatly smushing the text in grammarly would help a lot. I would suggest trying to make it 'flow', but just mostly at the start The rest is great, just the opening is a tiny bit bland. I am in no means a professional, so please take my...

Thanks for the feedback! It helped me a lot. I put it in grammarly and found a lot of punctuation and spelling mistakes. No, I haven't posted it yet.

This is my very first chapter of a story I'm writing General Hawk slapped his desk inside the canvas tent. The drowsy assistant woke up with a jolt at the sudden crash. "Wha-what, sir?" he asked nervously, trembling slightly. The general was feared among the men, with a short temper and...

Personally, I really like it. I think the style of writing is really charming.