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  1. fantasyretreat

    Too many characters?

    Hey guys, New author here. I recently got a comment on my story (literally the first comment). It says that the number of characters I introduced in the first chapter of my story is hard to keep up with. So I edited the first chapter a little and added dialogue tags to the speeches that didn't...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Late to the feedback party, I guess...if you ever get the chance to check my work, please do. I'm new here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/848947/dark-one-a-progression-fantasy/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Hi, New author here. I'd like to get a feedback on my story - if I'm not late to the party. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/848947/dark-one-a-progression-fantasy/
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    New Series Comment Request Thread

    Would love to join the fun - assuming I'm not late ? genre:- action, adventure, progression, reincarnation, anti-hero https://www.scribblehub.com/series/848947/dark-one-a-progression-fantasy/ A human from earth is reborn in a world of magic to become the 'Dark One' - a monster destined for...
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    How many chapters to save up before launching new work?

    Good tip. Many authors don't listen to readers when they speak up, but it's the reader that'll read and enjoy the story after all. I'm a new author. Have five chapters up as of this post, but my backlog...:s_wink: I'm taking my time though, because I also feel that as a newbie author, you gotta...
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    A true anti-hero protagonist

    I guess you can say my MC is anti-hero. But my story is just starting, so it is yet to be seen. I should add the tag though, might even help put more eyes on it (now which tag should I remove?)... You can still check out my story to see if it suits you. My MC is a trouble maker, he's not...
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    [temporary closed :: busy writting]?Raymann's Free Feedback Shop?

    :LOL: Took the words right outta my mouth! Here's my story. It's new though, so please go easy on me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/848947/dark-one-a-progression-fantasy/
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    What is it like to post on AO3 and/or RR?

    Have this issue on RR. One thing I can say for RR is that PF and LitRPG are what trends over there. I write PF and within a month I had quite a lot of eyes on my book. But like you said, the downvotes were a nightmare. The best thing to do is just to detach your emotions from criticism and...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Would love a feedback on my story. New author here though. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/848947/dark-one-a-progression-fantasy/
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    Does a villain always have to be redeemed?

    Meh. Disney writes what Disney wants to watch... nowadays anyway. But no, I think villains need to be punished. We read and watch fantasy so we can escape reality, doesn't mean all the rules must change for fantasy. Some rules should not be broken.
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    Feedback thread from me.

    Would love a feedback on my story too.
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    What's your Magic Systems

    Magic systems, huh... I'm a new author on SH so I basically don't know the trend. But I write Progression Fantasy. Magic in my world building will come in phases so to speak. It is quite simple actually. My universe calls what you might call 'mana' in yours, 'essence' - the energy that...
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    Writing Bite Size vs Lenghty Chapters

    I've written as little as 1.7k words and as much as 3k+ words. It all depends on the message you're trying to pass across in said chapter.
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    What do y'all use to write?

    Hello guys. New author here. I use Google Docs, both on my phone and laptop. I write mostly on my laptop though.
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