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LOL thanks! It's meant to be a mundane scene to set up the world setting and cause some frustration :blob_happy: (I might have gone overboard though so I'll consider cutting it when I'm doing revision)

haha! Thank you for your input! :blobtaco: I see :blob_hmm:. Thank you!!

Thank you!! :blob_evil_two:

Hello! This excerpt is from chapter 7 of my story. I just wanted feedback from readers if you're able to feel the way I wanted to portray in the story. Thank you for your time <3 ----------------- PHOENIX Lily Bianca’s eyes fluttered open. Gentle rays of sunlight brushed across her...

This sounds cool! Here's mine, thank you!! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/890910/altered-threads-of-fate-gl-isekai/

I would appreciate feedback from this story, thank you so much!! :blob_evil_two: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/890910/altered-threads-of-fate-gl-isekai/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/890910/altered-threads-of-fate-gl-isekai/ I appreciate the feedback! Thank you so much :blob_cookie: