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  1. lilwriter

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Thank you! I agree with your feedback. I was trying (failing) to pace the scene utilizing more words in some places, and then making the pace feel fast by less words in other. But I still have a lot to learn. As for the writing style; yeah I dunno either lol. I get frustrated with myself. Oh...
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    Chapter 16 is live! I’m now at 95 pages! Can’t wait till I get to 100, I’m stoked ??

    Chapter 16 is live! I’m now at 95 pages! Can’t wait till I get to 100, I’m stoked ??
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Are any of the chicks hungry today? If so, I would like to offer them my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1007705/lady-ori-has-a-dark-side/
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    SEX APPEAL

    I feel like there have to be perks
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    Dystopian Scene

    When Lyla arrived at school, she took her shoes off, placed them in the bins, and gave her backpack to the officer on duty. When it was clear she had neither contraband nor weapons, she was waved through. She was stopped by the Guidance Counselor, Mrs. Brown, in the halls lined with gum wads...
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    Bullying in Fiction

    Ya’ll aint getting the shit beat out of you anymore? Well, at least there’s that
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    What do you consider to be generic Isekai Fantasy?

    TBH I love isekai tropes because I can turn my brain off. I also don’t read stories with male main characters. Best tropes: - Hot ML who is OP but blushes a lot - Villain FL with hopes and dreams - Cutie best female friend that you want the FL to end up with - Will they/won’t they end up...
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    SEX APPEAL

    Eating an apple alludes to the knowledge of good and evil—where Eve ate the fruit and suddenly understood sex and nakedness. Same if you see someone eating a pomegranate. It’s a classy way of saying “This guy fucks” (among a host of other meanings) and it’s used a lot in manga/manhwa because...
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    How do i write science fiction!!?

    This reminds me of that Mitchell and Webb skit where the writers write a hospital series but don’t know anything about medicine lmaooo Medical Drama
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    How to get a novel cover art for free

    I used Dream AI for awhile (iphone) but switched to Midjourney because my husband uses it for DnD
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    Fallen Angel Opposite

    Mythology is anything that people invent. Therefore, Lucifer/Satan is a fallen angel because popular culture has declared it that way—in books and stories, movies and fiction—ie myth.
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    Smut is the way

    Yeah I was just going by common webcomic tags. Webcomics don’t have “erotica” they have ecchi (horny but nothing happens) and smut (porn or porn with story) and hentai (straight-up porn). My story has a sex scene but I worried that adding the smut tag would make it out like my story is...
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    Smut is the way

    Yoooooooo!!
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    Do you drink milk?

    Drinking cow’s milk is my ancestral identity ? mu ju
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    How to make the shiny and delicious toast

    All good ideas. I raise you a very certain-kind-of-American solution: take toast, spread peanut butter on it, add slices of banana, honey drizzle Eat and feel all your trauma just melt away~
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    Smut is the way

    That’s the point though. Trans people are normal people, so it would be strange to make it seem abnormal. Like I’m not gonna make my story all about how my FL has a vagina.
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    Smut is the way

    lmfao I guess I mean the Korean manhwa kind. For me and my isekai girlies, we’re in a constant drought. I’m bi so I’m blessed ? Literally doesn’t matter as long as someone is hot
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    Smut is the way

    huehuehue I totally get it tho ?
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    Smut is the way

    good wlw manhwa/fantasy stories are so damn scarce so that makes so much sense ?
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