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Okay, this isn't a new first chapter draft. It's the seventh draft of my first chapter, which I wrote a while ago. At first, I dismissed it cuz I felt it had too many problems as an isekai story first chapter. Still, I'm the author, so I don't know what this first chapter will seem like from...

The one above me was a mad scientist in their previous life. Yes, the one who conducted unethical experiments with cows and cats.

Created this bookmark to pass the time. (the meterial I drew on was something between a cardboard and chart paper, so It was hard to draw on it using pencil, let alone do shading.)

Though his friends disagreed more often than not, Arin was not one to get scared easily; he had seen his share of horrors while growing up. Still, this place made him uneasy for a different reason.

So, should I stick with this first chapter? The thing is, I intentionally made it somewhat like a typical isekai chapter, to be safe. My story is a dual-protagonist reincarnation story. And that was the first protagonist. I have already decided how the second protagonist will reincarnate, but...

Chunnibyou God of Supramicy stared at this thread as his eyes lit up with interest. Changing his tone into a dignified one, he spoke. "Orb, listen well and answer! How Many Believers will this one gain by the end of this year?"

At first, I thought it was a meme. The problem is that it looks too much like a generic advertisement that you see on most websites. And your idea of stuffing that girl in the smartphone screen was the worst. It's as if you are forcefully trying to make it generic instead of unique. Side note...

Disregarding whether or not you would be able to earn on Webnovel, that contract's biggest problem that I found is that they take away all the control you have over your own novel. Loosing your IP is far worse than most think. Imagine that you want to make a web comic out of your novel, you...

Main theme, huh? Well, it's an ideological clash between the two protagonists' philosophies. It's about dreams and goals; it's need, it's value, it's problems. It's the clash between a negatively biased worldview and a positively biased worldview.

To know the entire context of the matter, check out part one of this thread. Is this chapter 1 good enough? Basically, I want feedback on my first chapter draft before I put it away as a polished chapter. I have checked and read it several times, made whatever Improvements I could think of...

Truth be told, I hadn't even checked who the OP of this thread even was.

I'm now in the process of refining my 18th first chapter draft. I think this one will be good enough as my actual first chapter.

The hell? OP's been missing for such a long time?

Chunnibyou God Of Supremacy smiled. His lips stretching a bit too wide, forming an evil grin. 'Let's incite conflict here.' The thought came to him, his grin becoming more evil, downright malicious. Clearing his throat with a light cough, he spoke. His voice solemn yet commanding. "Hear me...

Siberian husky

"Praise the Chunnibyou God of Supremacy! Worship the Chunnibyou god of Supremacy! Bow before the Chunnibyou God Of Supremacy!!!"

Well, what is the point of asking for feedback on something that you didn't write? Setting aside things like ethics and morality, and only talking based on pure logic, asking for feedback on something that AI wrote is meaningless. After all, what would you even do with that feedback? Train the...