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  1. JayDirex

    Why do you keep writting?

    This effeminate fellow may be able to carry a story. I'll purchase him for Doggo Coin!
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    Why do you keep writting?

    This is generally not sustainable, hence why most authors drop the story. But for the remarkable few who grind on I'm fairly convinced that (for some super-human god-like trait, they really don't give a fk about readers and are content to see their own stuff posted online. God bless em.
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    Death of Individuality

    I think you're putting too much faith in individuality since we live in a society. And we're all shaped by our community in one way or another.
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    Should I use Grammarly?

    This exactly. You don't have to use it to write your story. Just let it fix the comma mistakes and stuff like that.
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    How to write a character in love but in a comical and embarrassing way

    yeah, I see now. Still, I want him to write the lame character as a gentleman like a goofy gentleman. Don't make him pervy or vulgar. Make him think in his mind that this sweet girl would be a wonderful wife and have visions of nonsense in his head.
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    How to write a character in love but in a comical and embarrassing way

    it's a bad idea. A lame character adds zero sexual tension to entice the reader. and at worst a lame character is annoying to read. what you should write is a regular ranger who does try but as a gentleman. He should even gets to the point where her heart flutters. Then you have to put her in...
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    Writing Easiest Genre to Start Out Writing in?

    Write a short story to get you started. But, yeah, slice of life. Because with a slice of life tag you can excuse a plotless, unfocused, amateur story. Mind you, a good slice of life is focused. But it's the genre easiest to have an MC meander around in.
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    Foreign languages in fiction

    Nah. As a reader I don't want to read gobbitlygook. So when I explain that the others are speaking another language it will be understandable to the reader and not understandable to whoever doesn't speak the language, by description. But I'm past the days of writing strange words that the...
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    Promote your story here!

    Mine has her in it ? She's Skye
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    Crazy Rating Idea

    I used to believe the same thing too about dismantling the one and two stars and forcing people to write a review if they want to give those Stars. But even if you implement that system it's still too many moving parts. The better option would just be likes and favorites. And anyone with a...
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    Lewdest Fictional Religion

    just have them worship DIONYSUS Was Dionysus raised as a girl? Zeus tells Ino to dress Dionysus in women's' clothing and raise him as a girl so he could avoid being detected by a vengeful Hera. However, Hera easily found him and Dionysus was once again displaced to be saved. This time he was...
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    I need a date

    These folks don't date. I do. And this is what I do on a first date, but you can use it with your wife. OK, You're going to take your date to Two places. the first she'll meet you at. The second she won't know about, but LOGISTICS!! the second spot can't be too far from the first spot. #1 The...
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    How do I lower my reading standards?

    You sound burned out on the usual stuff you read. I won't tell you to stop reading, since that's what you do. But I will advise you try reading something different. (There's way more stuff out here than just genderbender.)
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    What is a Prologue?

    Definition of a prologue is not a hook: The Content of the Prologue The author uses the prologue to give background information about the story’s world, its characters, and the events occurring in the book; introduce the framework for the main story; entice the reader to keep on reading by...
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    What is a Prologue?

    You don't need a prologue. You think you do But you don't. People who think they need prologues are typically newbs and have the mistaken belief that readers want to read a 6-8k info dump for a story they have no vested interest in. No, they don't. I advise you to listen to a quote from Author...
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    Sometimes I wonder if people forget English

    They sound like characters in an anime school. Which makes you protagonist-kun. Better be careful or a demon may come to slay you at night. So you need to awaken your hidden Mana. You've been warned
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    Writing Prompt Please Write This Story For Me~

    Fang – fragrance, virtue Min – quick or clever :)
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    Writing Prompt Please Write This Story For Me~

    Just a quick sketch of that scene would be cool
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    Writing Prompt Please Write This Story For Me~

    No, I'm kidding. But he can certainly take the idea if he wants it.
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