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All right now using the tips in this post I have edited the prologue. If you compare it to the original and tell me how did I manage? ---January Late Evening--- Tom Tailor drove his luxury company car on a winding highway in Bulgaria. The darkening, sky filling with heavy snowfall, made it hard...

I happen to agree with you. Very few things could be done to fix that currently without external help. May be in time my writing skills will improve enough to fix the story.... The two negative comments about the story were from native speaking readers. Yet I got a 5 stars review from a reader...

(y) (y) (y) I would like to express my sincere gratitude to ?‍?Sensei Trondheim and ?‍?Professor JayDirex for their kind and patient assistance. I would also like to thank Corty for their second much more serious post. (y)(y)(y)

(y) (y) (y) I would like to express my sincere gratitude to ?‍?Sensei Trondheim and ?‍?Professor JayDirex for their kind and patient assistance. I would also like to thank Corty for their second much more serious post. (y)(y)(y)

(y)(y)(y) I would like to express my sincere gratitude to ?‍?Sensei Trondheim and ?‍?Professor JayDirex for their kind and patient assistance. I would also like to thank Corty for their second much more serious post. (y)(y)(y) I would also like NOT to thank to...

Well your lesson seriously meshed up my knowledge from my school years. I had been taught that past simple tense represent a finished action in the past. Period. like "Tom drove his car and parked outside his house. Then he cursed his wife who was sleeping in the front seat" He finished his...

Thank you for your help!!!!! I still have a question thou: It is not so clear to me why should I replace?: " Tom Tailor was driving his luxury company car on a highway" with the suggested "Tom Tailor drove his company car on a winding highway in Bulgaria." It was meant to express a...

"Also, I'm a Filipino. ?" I would have never guessed that. Your English is perfect like lvl 100 linguistics skill.

HAAA I knew it! You are too good at this! Plus you have the patience needed to deal with .. you know things like my prologue .... lol Your students should be honored to have you as their Sensei! PS: "No worries" isn't that Australian? like "No worries mate"?

Well... I can not express my gratitude for your help so I will just say a simple THANK YOU SENSEI!!! PS: I feel like I am back to school :) PS2: Can I call you Sensei from now on?

Do not mock with my work you f... face Ps: F... face = funny face. that was goblined speach as well. And if you are gona write bulshit beat it. It is a serious post at author section of the forum

The prologue is about 1,3 k words, so it wont take much of your time may be 20-30 minutes. +Most of the grammar mistakes have been fixed thanks to an enthusiastic reader! So! You are bored and You have nothing to do but to show your skills in writing(editing)?! Contact me and let's get that...

AN employee woke me earlier than usual. And no she wasn't naked in my bed waking me up with a kiss but called by phone to report sickday. So i had more time to enjoy my morning coffee and read some stuff at SH

well may be you need another hobby like gardening or dating ... Just remember Do not do DRUGS! Alchohol is fine but that is what you should take moderately as well! PS: Or you can help me editing the prologue of a great novel (a work of mine), so that way it can become even better matching your...

While speaking about prologues I need some help as well. The Prologue being a crucial part of the work and the opening face of a novel needs to be perfect. So I need HELP of native speaking author to polish it. Will someone give me a hand with this? It is only about 1k words and many of the...

From my personal experience i know that prologues must be as short as possible and just long enough to introduce the mc and their current situation. People tend to dislike the prologues

May be you got an alergy or something?

oh mate you are gonna end alone then You got a hell of a list for ideal man. Those men do exist but you better get in line with another gazilion candidates waiting for them.. Get back to reality mate... You are gonna cook and clean the house if he brings the house income. You are gonna suck...

My first love Manuela will never abandon me unless i lose my right hand in a car accident Ps: she is always there for me if i feel the heat. Always ready, never having menstrual cramps or head aches

That bulshit happens only in fakced up countries like USA