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  1. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    thats a sick idea ! Thanks bro .I thought the text looked off too . And the zooming out idea didn't cross my mind .I am an idiot
  2. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    Hey buddy! I tried to make another cover this time opting for a more minimalist approach . Tried to copy your style i am sorry
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    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    thank you . I feel like a bad uncle when u mentioned a 5 year old hahaha
  4. patbateman123x

    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    lmao . You are wild dude .Well my story doesn't have any wars but he likes his fair bit of violence . I am glad i haven't named him that badly lol
  5. patbateman123x

    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    ive barely scratched the surface .Its only been a day in universe and i am already 16000 words in hahaha For now i guess i ll stick to the current names . I don't want to go back to editing them and accidentally missing a name and ruining the readers pov . Thank you guys!
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    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    I ll keep that in mind thank you .I am barely in the beginning of the story . However i don't have a sense of how long a usual story is supposed to be . Is 16000-18000 words that far in to go back and change names? i like your style dude thanks for the input!
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    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    For a casual reader maybe no but i am studying the language so very much do lol
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    How do you guys go about changing character names ? I want to rename some characters but i m torn .

    So i started out my novel with names i really liked for my mc and fmc but i thought names relevant to the theme and story would make sense so i changed them midway to reflect that and now i am 12 chaps in with some 16000 words .But now I've encountered a dilemma I've faced myself as a reader ...
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    Do you prefer past tense or present tense?

    I prefer the present because in my mind it puts me right into the world i am writing about . Not just as the protagonist but as the side characters .Kinda like having a conversation with your friends in your dorm . I use the past tense for memories and stuff but that's just my own way of...
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    Cover's Measurements/What do you use?

    i somehow squeezed down all i needed into the small pixel size . But my mc isn't gay enough in the cover .Although he do be a pretty boy in the sketches .
  11. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    i got it to work somehow . Ty for the reply
  12. patbateman123x

    Cover's Measurements/What do you use?

    ty for this .My book cover just got butchered lol
  13. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    Thank you for the feedback . You know that could actually work .I actually have a few more sketches of the mc i might have to analyse them to come up with a good idea to potray the duality. Yours was a godsend . It gave me some inspiration for symbolism. There are light hearted ones where he...
  14. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    I only gave my friend a rough sketch you know one of those really bad ones .... but he turned it into something out of a shoujo manga ...Personally i don't like light at all but we are not here to debate over him . Maybe the colors and lighting make him look like him but i just asked him to draw...
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    Personal writting problem

    you are totally right .For a writer , stepping out of one's comfort zone can really bring about great ideas .
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    Personal writting problem

    i'd call you "larger" than life
  17. patbateman123x

    Made a book cover for my story . Would appreciate any feedback

    ty ! someone pointed out a lot of things i can fix in this so i might improve on this given how bleak the cover looks.Maybe add some color and some light hearted stuff to the art like the mc smiling or something since the novel only foreshadows the tragic stuff so far .I don't want people to...
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    Personal writting problem

    *mad lad intensifies* . The mc i am writing is no pussboi when it comes to sex but when i think about writing a sex scene i am like "nah fam u ain't cut out to write this " .
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    Your mom jokes alternatives

    the only thing i can think of are cuck jokes .Reminds me of Cosmic Emperor .Kiba was wild
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