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  1. TheEldritchGod

    Regrettable, But Necessary

    You ever write an outline and it has a theme? The story needs to hit certain story beats in a certain order to make sense. It isn't about the message, but just to be coherent. You need to hit these points in the story arc or, well... What's the point? Its a good story, but then you come to a...
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    I need a date

    What I mean is, I've been married for going on 30 years now so I actually have no idea how to have a date. Like, what do the kids do these days anyways? I'd go to a firing range or something. So, like, assuming you were a normal teenager, I need like a proper date. Oh. Assume they're 16 and 17...
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    Need second pair of eyes

    Yeah so, I write ahead along certain plot lines. Wrote up the conclusion to one, but... You ever get that feeling that MAYBE you nailed it or maybe you fucked up bad, but you aren't sure? Like, I either scored a hundred or a zero. One or the other. Anyways, my usual pair of second eyes isn't...
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    When Your Good Guy Accidentally Turns Into A Good Villain

    So I was reading a story here, on a lark, and I won't say which one, but as I started reading it, I got annoyed with the 'Best Friend' of the MC. As It went on I got increasingly pissed off, but then I realized something. I thought it was intentional. And with that mind set, I reframed...
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    Suggestion Request: Plot Resolution (how to get home)

    Imagine Earth. Our earth. Surround it in a cloud of Dark Matter/PLOTonium. PLOTonium is anti-magic. Ideas and thoughts are the building blocks of mana. Earth, with it's 7.8 billion people and the internet connecting all those people is brimming with mana. A crack appears and mana comes flooding...
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    How do you come back?

    So you reach down deep. You write that chapter. That special one. The one where your MC is in tears. But you can't just put him in tears. You need the reader to FEEL that pain. So you dig deep. You find that pain. You drag it out. You tear it out of your chest and you show it to the world. You...
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    Stories with reversed morality concerning gender roles

    Title says it all. Anything that is in the same vein as World Of Moral Reversal. Not interested in the sex part. I'm interested in the reversal of gender roles and what the results might be. So any suggestions you have might be of help. I already did a search of "Reverse" and "reversal" on SH...
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    Character Assessment (World Of Moral Reveral/Urisugi Harou)

    https://kissmanga.org/chapter/manga-yl975546/chapter-32 I need help. I'm trying to figure out this character. I'm looking for a personality profile. I have ideas about him, but unfortunately there isn't a lot of material other than: He lik2Fucc There is the original series, but I don't think...
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