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Legend! :cool:

Please can whoever's next pick me up some chocolate chip cookies? (I've come over all peckish)

Coming soon, the Non Fungible Novel

Bloody stalking vampires 😔

Her lips were red, her looks were free, Her locks were yellow as gold: Her skin was as white as leprosy, The Nightmare Life-in-Death was she, Who thicks man’s blood with cold.

See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something emotionally. Thats how you make a compelling character. I'd suggest as @Eldoria, have it so he needs to win to help a sick sibling. But he grapples with that in so doing...

Well 'Shit quality' doesn't tell you a lot. Is the issue with action? pacing? character? Unless its something helpful there's no point engaging with it. Elsewise yeah, it's probably not a work of earthshattering brilliance - it's your first attempt at writing a novel. Just keep going and keep...

It's actually not just an ESL problem, even native writers run into bits where they just can't get the sentence to feel right. Personally I like to insert tags in block capitals like: 'John said *ANGRY REPLY*' - so I can easily find it later without breaking my writing flow. So, perhaps you...

I did these three to serve as riddle-poems for my fiction. Ten points for any who can solve them without that context lol Puss she stands in endless wait Out beyond the palace gate Out beyond where daylight’s greying Little mice go running, playing Always looking, never heeding Bramble, claw...

I usually use a glug of olive oil, and then let a wedge of butter melt into it before adding the meat.

'666 Readers' - I have achieved 'Satanic Author' Status at last!

My partner has already gone to bed. Should I steal his chocolate bar from the fridge?

rough and irritating

it's coarse

I don't like sand

Yep, I'd probably call it character driven queer fantasy, but there's a lot of fairytale motiffs baked in by design :)

At one point a couple of stray cardamom pods fell into my protagonist's backpack. Thus began a chain of events that ultimately saved the kingdom.

Free-range corvids, kept on a diet of sorrow and lament. Sent to slaughter without ever knowing a single moment of joy or happiness. They're finger-lickin' good :)

The one above me is no longer winning (Hang on, this is the right game, right? FML)