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So it seems my restructuring of the intro of my story has enhanced the flow, but does anyone have any opinions on the story itself? Does anyone like the story, and where it's going? Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Positive or negative.

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2013. Just dabbling, but the story I am presenting here on ScribbleHub is the same story I started way back then, just greatly refined.

Constantly.

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Please continue. What do I owe you? How do I pay?

Thank you for the detailed analysis of my story's opening. Certainly food for thought. Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate you spending the time to have a look. Thank you for taking the time to read and write such a thoughtful response. I really appreciate it. I completely agree with...

When you get a chance, please have a look at my story referenced in my signature.

I'm right there with you. Mine's a feel-good story about love and life. There are no punchy bits.

Sarah is now in the first line of the first chapter after the prologue.

In my story, I originally spent the first few chapters world-building, and just about everyone told me this was not the best way to do it. Chapter 7 was when my main protagonist, Sarah, was introduced. In my current version of my story, I do some world-building in the prologue and introduce my...

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In my original story, I spent the first few chapters world-building and was told by just about everyone that this was not the best way to do it. Chapter 7 was when my main protagonist, Sarah, was introduced. In my current version of my story, I do some world-building in the prologue and...

Very nice.

I'm the same way. I think I'm good at a lot of things. However, reality can be a very different thing.

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In my opinion, it depends on the format you're writing in. If you're writing Webnovel / LitRPG style, a rapid cadence of paragraphs and chapters seems more on pace. However, to me, a true novel of 100,000 to 200,000 words would be better presented in chapters of 2500 to 5000 words and would...

Thank you for your concern. Unfortunately, your perspective is valid. Fortunately, I don't trust anyone on the internet. LOL! It's worth a chance though, I guess... I sent a PM to @Thorkell_40k. Thanks, PM sent PM sent The AI-generated image of my main protagonist, Princess Sarah.

Hello all, I hope this is allowed here, but I'm looking for an artist to do some work for me on the novel I am trying to finish. Lightfall's Edge is an Epic Fantasy that needs to come alive. My Avatar on this site is actually one of the opening scenes of the entire epic. I used AI to generate...

What makes my fiction unique? Most fantasy treats power as something that must be used, often through conflict or domination. My story goes the opposite direction. It’s about restraint, stewardship, and quiet guidance rather than conquest. The tone is intentionally gentle. The stakes can be...