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  1. BluePheasant

    Reader friendly novel?

    Yes but there's a fair share of rules i believe that helps a story to be more attention grabbing and interesting or thrilling to read. I need to know if my story is bland to read or my characters are interesting or not, or if my plots and twists are mind-blowing or not, is my story is actually...
  2. BluePheasant

    Reader friendly novel?

    I'm not familiar with wattpad preference. Also have no idea what you mean by write like making frnds with the readers...
  3. BluePheasant

    Reader friendly novel?

    I looked at the reader's part of the forum. Lots of ppl posted there asking for reviews. No one really volunteers to give helpful feedback. So I tried using the voluntary feedback posts some do. And they gave their own subjective opinion. After that they say, it might just be their own...
  4. BluePheasant

    Reader friendly novel?

    Any suggestions? What might those active sites be? Not an option sadly Where will I find the target audience then? Someone said that my writing style is kind of Japanese LN styled. I mean is there any site where they prefer that more?
  5. BluePheasant

    Reader friendly novel?

    As a new writer, it's almost impossible to know if readers are gonna like the story or not, or at least I don't really know if mine is. Structure and writing style can be improved easily and I can know that just by reading the stuff again. But I still can't figure out if the story itself has any...
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    I'd appreciate some critique on my first story.

    Adult and smut tag with good enough writing.. what else do you expect from SH?
  7. BluePheasant

    Recommendations A good VR into reality story

    Guess not much of VR stories fan here...but I'm writing one, since you have nothing else you could give mine a read...but seems fair to give you some warnings. It's not about getting stuck in the game, and it's still in its early phase and I publish slow. It's in my signature if you wish to read...
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    Promote your story here!

    It's about a Virtual Reality RPG game...so litrpg Being A Mage Is Boring, So I Created A Class For Myself Guess the name does all the work for me. But it's not just all about that of course. Take a look to know more about the series...
  9. BluePheasant

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Pm me the feedback. I wanna know the problems from a readers point of view that I need to fix. Here's the link https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-a-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/
  10. BluePheasant

    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    Thanks a lot for the feedback... Yes, my story leans more toward the Japanese LN style. And I'll try to do what you have suggested.
  11. BluePheasant

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Oh! That puts a smile on my face...
  12. BluePheasant

    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    I'd really appreciate the feedback and welcome all the constructive criticisms. Here's my novel~ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-a-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/
  13. BluePheasant

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I'm aware of the things you have said. And it confirmed me about those things now. About culture fetishizing, you might be right. Since I'm not a western, writing using English or American culture can also be called culture fetishizing. However, I want to write using Japanese culture, but...
  14. BluePheasant

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Okay, let's hear my future prediction, Psychic-sama. Here is my novel~ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/
  15. BluePheasant

    Trending ranking awareness

    Okay, then how about only authors knowing the rankings, not the readers. That way authors will know where they are and how much they have to go through. It will help authors to get motivated to write more. Tag rankings don't really help much for the newer writers cz it depends on the view.
  16. BluePheasant

    If anyone is lurking around in my profile, please give my novel a read. And if you can give a...

    If anyone is lurking around in my profile, please give my novel a read. And if you can give a feedback then It'd make me real happy. Here's the link~ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/
  17. BluePheasant

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I would love to know if it's interesting enough. Constructive criticism would very much help me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-a-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/
  18. BluePheasant

    How to increase wordpool for strong and unique words

    Thank you guys.. writing down words... using them in normal convos even if they feel weird... watching lots of YouTube...and not losing hope... I got it xD
  19. BluePheasant

    How to increase wordpool for strong and unique words

    I know words...but the problem is that they don't come to mind while writing. Like yesterday while I was writing, I used a sentence like this, "We were supposed to inspect the interior of the chamber as it lit up." I know all these words obviously but still I had to google them up cz they just...
  20. BluePheasant

    How to increase wordpool for strong and unique words

    Can you suggest me something to read that will be help me understand the better choice of words for certain situations.
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