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Fanservice is when it’s catered to the fans. You only cross the NSFW line when erotic stuff is thrown into the mix, now it’s NSFW Fanservice. For Example, say you had a game and there’s a character from the game that fans liked, like a lot. You then proceed to make skins strictly for that...

Just got finished rereading it and I’m genuinely happy. You took what I said and applied it fairly well. You applied the MC’s previous experience as a Netizen and had him use it to his advantage. He’s got the important stuff out the way now he can genuinely indulge in the life he now possesses...

Have them pull a Magneto.

On a cite like this which I mostly consume erotic writing I will say it does cater to (I don’t wanna majority) decent amount of people. It will help your story in the long run but don’t feel like you need to add sex and what not to garner a large audience on other stories you might write in the...

Do your other hobbies and only write if you feel up to it. Just take it easy.

I understand that and it’s your story so do write it how you want. I just kinda felt the main character was a little dumb for that but it is a story and I can’t exactly use my logic on a character. Yes the glossary is the best place for that so you and the readers who eventually get far along...

Sorry I vanished for a bit but I usually just speedrun writing and attempt to do sum grammar fixes but I still take a min. I will go over the chapters I posted and see what I can fix. Thank you for the bit on the time skips, one thing I kinda hate is writing the POV of a baby. I look at it as...

That’s completely a fair point (the burn out one). One thing I’ve been doing that I think has fairly helped me is just writing what I can at my own pace. I don’t force myself to write or make it a thing to where I have to. Right now I’m at a place where I do worry if I don’t have an end goal my...

Thank you !!

Just skimmed through your story and I want to preface this by saying I’m relatively a new writer (mostly an amateur) so take this with a grain of salt. Since it’s only two chapters ima just speak on the stuff I found issue with. 1. Why didn’t he contact one of the names on the contact list or...

I like the sound of having a vague ending in mind. I could just pull an Akame Ga Kill and kill off my main character(s) then end the story. I’m just indecisive tbh. I’ll check these stories out though and see if I can learn something from them aside from the vague summaries you already gave me...

Dunno if your still doing this cuz I’m lwk 2 months late but here’s my story if you are :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1702601/a-new-life/

I want to thank you for this. This actually helped a lot. Why the keeping my story continuously going bit won’t rlly work for me is how I set my story up. If u don’t mind me ranting a tid bit. my story is told from the pov of a girl who died (due to her own actions) and was reincarnated into...

I just started writing my own story a few days ago and something I’ve realized is, I don’t know what the end goal is. Like where do I want the story to end at or where do I want it to go. I have the general idea but again I’m just not for sure. My question to other writers out there is do you...

I just looked at your roast and I want the hard truth before I continue going forward with wtv my story is. Ima new writer and I’ve been trying to put tg a story based on a concept I like. I do use Grammarly and dabble in ChatGPT to fix up my grammar and make sure my characters interactions are...