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  1. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - Reception Desk

    > > > Missing Children [SC206] Sponsor: Adventurer's Guild Location: Scribel City Required Level: 2 Objectives: Check the "Missing Persons" list at the guild. Search for and locate a missing child. If alive, rescue and reunite them with their family. The streets of...
  2. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - Reception Desk

    OOC: For evaluator, please don't use things I've written in story, just quest report?
  3. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    @GM, can I do that? having two almost identical character (with two character sheet of course)? My intention with the gamer's skill is to have intuition-like correction. Like, I should adjust the swing angle a little bit. or, I should reduce the sugar by half a teaspoon. So my second character...
  4. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Well... level 4? I planned for the vampirism to make two of him. (one alive, one undead) From that, I'll decide if it is the undead him versus the living him, or if the living is just a blood bag. I am prioritizing noncombat skills honestly. At least for now until his mindset changed. As a...
  5. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Well... from what I have read in others, their story felt like it is flowing. While mine felt like it is too stiff.
  6. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    1. Too many dialogue. 2. word choice (I don't get the concept of character voice, honestly. I thought it was just how they speak, but my dialogue felt lacking and artificial). 3. plot structure. Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, conclusion. I feel like, what I write don't even...
  7. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    All of them? my story feel weird honestly.
  8. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    writers of AG, do you have any guide to write a coherent story?
  9. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    I planned to make my character a vampire familiar during the prison quest. But I couldn't go to it. The jail bar prevented my character to go to the cell.
  10. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Does anyone know how to search for anime subtitles? I'm not looking for pirated anime, but only subtitle file to remind me the dialogue.
  11. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Make a character who can manipulate electricity like misaka mikoto, and make him/her use money as bullet.
  12. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Okay. Thanks for this.
  13. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Well, yes. That's true, because the alternative is bandit subjugation. Isn't cart those things you can pull with two hand? Or those like in mines? I am wondering if cart is big enough to be pulled by horses.
  14. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    Should the quest be appended with failure: -3700G or more? @GM is the quest master right?
  15. Alma

    Adventurer's Guild Adventurer's Guild - OOC Room

    I am currently writing a customer service quest, in this scenario. Can anyone help me think? Suppose that a party of two is doing the asteria village shipment quest and the guard one. One of them stole the cart and horse, and the remaining party member report it back. I imagine that a merchant...
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