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Honestly, criticisms herein scribblehub are rare. You might want to go to more active sites for more criticisms. Not necessarily a friend... It can be your acquaintances or your relatives if you're comfortable with that. Heck! It can be me! I'll read that!

Midnight snacking

How about a second person's point of view? What? Why are you not laughing? LAUGH!

They meet. They died. There, tragedy. Okay, on a serious note... There are no easy genres, just the easiest among them. Romance is difficult if you have no experience in romance. A slice of life is easy to write, but a good slice of life is not easy to write. I mean, how are you going to...

Okay, this is a weird question, alright. I used Grammarly to write my recent chapter and while it no longer contains grammatical errors and possibly misspellings compared to my previous chapters, it feels too formal. It feels like I'm writing a business letter, not a novel. I'm using it right now.

Normally, it's the other way around. An old man playing with the girl avatar and meets a male character and flirts- Ah! My bad! This is a thread looking for a novel, not real cases! Lol!

Yeah! Every author always forgets to mention breathing, or blinking! It feels unrealistic that these characters don't have basic human characteristics! On a serious note, I think I can simplify what you feel in a single word - doubt. It is perfectly okay to doubt everything. We lead ourselves...

Comedy. It's the laughter that makes my day. My ideal story, eh, plot with great pacing combined with brains.

I use android tablet. Don't judge me. Whenever I tap a paragraph I'm writing on, the page scrolls up.

You want to know good magic systems? I dunno, I'm not a magic system enthusiast and if I see a good one, I'll completely ignore it just as how we conveniently ignore lighting and sounds in performance acts despite being one of the important parts of it. Bad magic systems, I know a lot. It's as...

I'm not a romance genre writer nor planning to write one but oh my god, I thought this post is just a rant of what a single person wants in an entire genre and that everyone who disagrees are [insert insults here]. Everything is detailed, the reasons, the guidelines, as well as few warnings and...

My mind crafted an NTR porn when the phrase "she felt the heat from his stare" registered to my mind... and I don't think people would like it. Yeah, let's just say she turned into a dumpling, funniest thing I have ever seen.

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Who is Lloyd?

Its a joke. I'm not hungry after all.

Pussycat. Cats are the best. Noted.

I feel that I wanna leave this world... I think my purpose to this life is as ambiguous as the very existence of this world. You see, whenever I see a deadly chemical or a very low place to jump onto, I always tell myself, it will only be sudden. After that painful part, it will be eternal...

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Incest. Family first, they say. On serious note, I never preferred shipping two characters, although there's this moment when I hoped for the two characters who have known for each other for a long time and saved each other. Yeah, slow burn romance.

M E N It's all men's fault there's dark humor. Quick! We should silence all men to stop dark humor! Pretty sure women doesn't have dark humor as well.