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Ohhh, I see! Thank you so much. This solution solved the two problems of trying to convey the revelation with an impact and trying to be concise! It's my bad for misunderstanding the reply. Ah, my bad! The scene basically starts with the son already dead, kind of a few minutes before the...

Well, definitely! I was more focusing on the ignorant brutality of the father, hence why I went into such detail on the viscera. As for the awkward writing, I realize I tend to write like as if there's a comic page that's in front of the reader, I still have to work on that habit. The lack of...

Definitely, my writing seems to have the typical fantasy feeling of just letting the genre cover the surroundings part which is definitely the weakest point. Thanks so much for being unbiased, as horrible as Isekais are, they just intrigue me a lot.

*Warning - Gore and Death* (A WIP on my latest chapter, just know that CPR in this world is generally well-known by many people but the setting is medieval specifically on the continent where the current chapter takes place in.) Sir! Sir! Please! My son's not breathing!" A man to Jono's right...

Inhuman characters with human feelings, and humans with inhuman feelings. I love especially when these two types of characters meet, the human suddenly feels this superiority within the inhuman's presence because the inhuman tries so badly to become like them yet as a human they don't feel this...

To me, the best battles are the ones that feel more like skirmishes. Like, there's one side then another and it's just chaotic fight where each member of the fight contributes their unique abilities to the battle.