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    HOW MUCH CAN A DISCRIPTION AFFECT THE VIEWS OF THE STORY

    The description should be like a cocktail dress. Shows enough legs that we are interested but hides enough that we are left wanting.
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    Can I Get Some Feedback For Candy Pop?

    Chapter too long. Split it up 1.5k is the sweet spot it will make you have better coverage over the days in stead of monster chapters. Easily too much exposition in the first chapter. The first glaring problem is overwriting, like, how much of this info is useful for the reader? do we need to...
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    Been a While

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    Hello friends, I will be away for a while

    If anyone of you reads I Don’t Know but it Seems Like I’m a Deer! you probably know this, but I am taking a (relatively long) hiatus to pursue traditional publishing. I have an upcoming draft that I am 1/3 of the way through, and I think it has the potential to be picked up by an agent. I'd...
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    I win, you all can't top this.

    Consistent schedule and popular tags, idk I think my writing is mediocre.
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    I win, you all can't top this.

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    What is your favorite series on this site?

    >Don't see my novels on here >*cries*
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    How old are you all.

    o7 proud of you soldier
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    How old are you all.

    Mostly curious.
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    How do you usually start your story? Why?

    Action... Not like action moie actions. But something that sets the plot in motion should happen in the first paragraph.
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    readers and charachters

    I like to imagine myself in the worlds I create but not the other way around
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    How much time would be good for speed running 1k word chapters?

    If I’m feeling it I can write 1k words in around 45 min but since your new probably 1.5 hours might be the sweet spot
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    Boost the number of readers

    So I do know times that are bad. These answers are all in the U.S. time slots BTW Despite what many people say do not post around lunchtime. You will be competing with too many people and there is a high likelihood you get buried. Ditto with dinner time as well. The best times to post are in...
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    Is there anyone who got inspired from movie/anime rather than from reading?

    A little bit of this, and a little bit of that. Anime and movies are fun, but one kinda has to read to learn prose.
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    A funny experience with a fan translation

    People can translate as much as they want. If it weren't for the translations people wouldn't have read my book anyway.
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    What is the best writing advice you’ve ever come across and take it to heart?

    Moreso life advice when it comes to creative work. But we're all imitators, nobody creates anything original. The work we do is all a desperate bid to try and match up to the people we think are "good", and the funny part is that those people we admire, were trying to imitate their "greats" as...
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    Can I have some advice on my synopsis/blurb?

    Whiles it’s good to start with the main character it’s too wordy in the beginning your should focus on identifying the conflict and previewing the plot rather than spending time talking about her “friends at the orphanage”
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    Any recommendations for light novels where MC is self-aware?

    The reincarnated into otome games has a lot of these Reincarnated as the piggy duke White pig reincarnation Dukes daughter Villainess reloaded Reincarnated as a mob character Legend of oda nobuna(though this technically is just a historical isekai) More traditional isekai Disciple of the Lich...
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    What is your ultimate goal as an author?

    The day I have enough clout to make an anime, I want to see my characters brought to life. at the very least I want to be traditionally publish with at least some renown.
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    War Crimes In Web Novels

    Just because it's not called a war crime doesn't mean it isn't one. But if you want a light novel with war crimes then Youjo senki might be up your alley.
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