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  1. NobleTalon

    Asking for synopsis feedback

    Yeah probably. Plus the fact that in the French language every word has a genre. It might seem weird for non-natives and it's one of the things that make ppl crazy when they learn french cuz they have to remember the correct genre for every word. For example, a horse (un cheval) is masculine...
  2. NobleTalon

    The Last to Comment Wins

    And I'm a helicopter.
  3. NobleTalon

    Asking for synopsis feedback

    Idk Cecil is a very girly name here, it might sound better for English natives but as a French guy I would probably not read a novel with a male MC being called Cecil tbh It's like The Amber Sword in which the MC is called Sophie, even tho I like the synopsis, I didn't went past the first...
  4. NobleTalon

    Asking for synopsis feedback

    It's a good synopsis, but a bit too long for my taste. You should shorten it a little bit. And please, rename your MC if he is a male. I know fantasy authors like to use french names when they talk about noblesse, but Cecil(e) is a female name in french and it's a little bit disturbing to...
  5. NobleTalon

    Recommendations MC with an impressive body

    lmao can't agree more In most lore of sci-fi space opera, you can find some kind of ultra-resilient super-soldiers, (40k, Halo, Metroid are my personal top 3). I myself wrote a novel with a highly genetically modified human as the MC. If you're more into fantasy, almost every isekai MC are...
  6. NobleTalon

    real evil mc.

    Is it good ? I have it in my bookmarks but I didn't start reading it yet
  7. NobleTalon

    What was the thing that inspired you to write.

    What inspired me to write was getting tired of beta Japanese MC and cliché stories about a righteous hero saving the world with his harem of waifus
  8. NobleTalon

    Favorite world aesthetics and why?

    grimdark, cuz it's cool
  9. NobleTalon

    Need advices about the pace of my novel

    Thanks for your answers ! :blob_salute: My story is more about mixing sci-fi with fantasy, the Isekai part isn't common as it is not about an Earthling teenager getting hit by a truck and sent to another world with op skills, in fact my MC is the weakest of his squad for now and he got...
  10. NobleTalon

    Need advices about the pace of my novel

    Right now I'm writing for fun because I enjoy it, but as I'm a new writer I don't know how fast the story should go. I guess I'll just stick with the same word count and wait later to change it once I receive enough reviews When we read a story, it is easy to judge it. It's only when we start...
  11. NobleTalon

    Need advices about the pace of my novel

    Hey guys, a reader sent me a pm on discord and asked me to shorten the chapters to make the story advance faster, while at the same time another reader told me to write longer chapters because he liked the story but he found it frustrating to 'not have enough materials to describe everything in...
  12. NobleTalon

    Whats the fastest red flag you've seen when reading

    When I started reading a Chinese novel and after a few chapters I saw a character named Didier Drogba. I was like "it's fine, the author just needed ideas for a name, everyone do it, etc." Later in the story, it was about the Manchester Empire fighting against Barcelona Empire, all the...
  13. NobleTalon

    Adding to the very-thin Mecha Genre

    I love the mecha designs, the artist did a great job ! Now I want to watch some good old-school Gundam lmao
  14. NobleTalon

    Broke through 2000 followers!

    I think I've got your novel in my bookmarks but I didn't read it yet. I will try to do so when I finish the novels I'm currently reading. GG for the 2000 followers btw :blobthumbsup:
  15. NobleTalon

    Gaining more readers/audiences

    I would highly recommend you to do so. Don't hesitate to add some baits, such as isekai or romance for example.
  16. NobleTalon

    Heroism and its defensiveness stance.

    This is why villains are cool and heroes suck. I love the comics and series The Boys for this part, the 'villains' are trying to do good by removing those so-called 'Heroes' who do not respect anything and feel free to do whatever they want, just cuz they are the heroes. It is way more...
  17. NobleTalon

    Forum game : let's make a story together !

    Hey guys, I just got an idea that could be fun to try, what if we make a story based on the comments everyone posted ? Instead of writing a full chapter, it might be fun to see how everyone can add his little touch to the story, and have a chapter written by ten or so people. Rules : Do...
  18. NobleTalon

    Gaining more readers/audiences

    Unless your novel is on the front page, you won't get many views from the site itself. Like people said above : your best bet is to put some key tags, those the most readers look for, and to post regularly. I started my novel 6 days ago, when it was on the front page I had a lot of traffic for...
  19. NobleTalon

    Heroism and its defensiveness stance.

    This is one of the reasons I stopped Japanese novels and I started to enjoy Korean novels instead. (I still don't like Chinese ones, or should I say I don't like Xianxia/wuxia fantasy and the Chinese names for their characters) The Japanese authors' mindset is mainstream, if they want to sell...
  20. NobleTalon

    I'm Looking For A LITRPG Novel With A MC Who Focus' On Levelling Up

    even if the end of the novel feels rushed, it is still one of the best of its kind. The guy starts from scratch and ends up op as f. A lot of Korean novels of the same kind (fantasy in real-world, dungeon, and monster invasions) are mainly axed on the MC leveling up. Most Japanese isekai have...
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