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Under his feet sounds so much more correct than under his foot Anyways i see what you mean by weirdly wordes i wanted to make it the opposite of grain but failed lul ty

Whats a good way to do dialogue in an situation that can be considered extreme? Also how can i make passage through paragraphs more seamless? Currently the way it is in my novel the way it goes from one paragraph to the other feels abrupt

Its not, which sentences would you say are weirdly constructed? Good ideas ty Also how do i go from one paragraph to the other without it feeling too abrupt

Proofreading doesnt fix typos :v anyways whats a good way to proofread

I think i have a decent chapter 1 now can you guys give feedback on it aswell? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1493021-golden-ruins/chapter/1494605/ Hope i did the show not tell part right was trying to do it correctly How do i ping u3 Probably cant hope yall see this

Currently changing a few stuff about the first chapter i dont like just got to the picture part will keep that in mind ty Edit: and now i feel like i made the beginning parts worse fun

Ill keep those in mind and try to see a few examples of show and not tell ty for the feedback I tried to get the setting on the center but i couldnt add more than this without it being an info dump thingie Edit: actually now that i look at it again the walking to the hill scene doesnt seem...

Need feedbacks for it review it based on if you would click the next chapter button or if you would drop it without clicking it. If you think it sucks dont just think it sucks, say it sucks and give me feedback for why it sucks so i can keep that in mind for my future chapters...

Amazing. Unfortunately i dont think 1 chapter is enough to get roaste- feedback with so i cant post mine Will post at a later date tho Actually ill post it now by the time it gets roasted ill have a few more chapters up anyways https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1493021/ruins-of-gold/