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  1. Sergeandgreen

    I want a Lit rpg with hard rules.

    That sounds similar to what I meant. Broken builds instead of a broken system. I will definitely look it up.
  2. Sergeandgreen

    I want a Lit rpg with hard rules.

    The Mc doesn't necesarrily need to suffer. I just want him to just use the tools everyone else has. Maybe level a little faster because he takes risks or something like that. So imagine you have a system where you can get 5 statpoints a level and can take like ten skills (active or passive...
  3. Sergeandgreen

    I want a Lit rpg with hard rules.

    Hey, I need some lit RPG recommendations where the system is solid and the rules apply to everyone. It's frustrating when you start a story and the main character can bend the rules or gets special treatment from the system. Like, they suddenly have extra skill slots or way more attributes than...
  4. Sergeandgreen

    true fantasy

    Sunflower : [A sunflower based litRPG] has quite a unique setting, where the mc is (surprise, surprise) a sunflower that gained sentience. With the senses and instincts of a more or less normal sunflower. A Gamer's Guide To Beating The Tutorial: is a cool story. I think it started as a fanfic...
  5. Sergeandgreen

    To Lewd Or Not To Lewd

    I think there is a difference between porn and a romance story with adult content. This difference is: 1. The Frequency. 2. The reason you include the scene. If you have adult content in every 10k words, you are writing porn. If you have it every 50k chapters, its not really porn in my...
  6. Sergeandgreen

    Lovely readers

    If you make an announcement like this, it always helps to add the story to your signature. It makes the hurdle of getting to the story lower. The signature will be added to the post as soon as you insert your story to your signature, so you don't even have to repost this.
  7. Sergeandgreen

    Having 30k words in just 5 chapters

    I think shorter chapters have the advantage that you can easily read the story in between. On a bus or train, for example. 5k chapters need a little longer to read, and it is unsatisfying if you have to stop mid-chapter. The attention span of people is also surprisingly low, so I guess pushing...
  8. Sergeandgreen

    Worst thing you can do right now (as an author)

    It can be done well. I mean, not if it is delivered like that, but if the reader is unsure of what was a dream/Illusion and what was reality. American Psycho, for example, did it rather well. But generally, I agree with you.
  9. Sergeandgreen

    A Quack Survey

    In Germany, we have a silly song with the following catchphrase: "Tote Enten sollten nicht verwesen, tote Enten bring man lieber zum Chinesen." which means "Dead ducks should not decompose; dead ducks are better taken to the Chinese." So yeah, I guess I have to run to the Chinese next door and...
  10. Sergeandgreen

    Writing Buddy

    Technically yes. But I would also become a beta reader for the other person.
  11. Sergeandgreen

    Writing Buddy

    Hey everyone, I'm on the lookout for a writing buddy who can provide consistent feedback on my chapters before I publish them. In return, I'm more than willing to reciprocate for fellow authors. I'm not just seeking someone for grammar checks; rather, I'd appreciate input on whether character...
  12. Sergeandgreen

    Write something that will make people's emotion to fluctuate.

    How soon? Like in 30+ years soon or in 1-2 years soon. If it's the later, I hope you have someone to talk to and are still able to make the most of the time you have. And always keep in mind that you can't take anything with you, so if money can buy you a little happiness, go for it. If it's...
  13. Sergeandgreen

    Christmas Wishlist

    Offering money is the better option. I mean, it's not a good option, but it's better than roofies. And less illegal. So maybe make roofies Plan C. How are the chances of plan A working?
  14. Sergeandgreen

    My friend asked me

    As someone who hasn't seen it, what is so controversial about it? Is it something like Redo Healer, or however it was called, or is it just the normal kind of bad?
  15. Sergeandgreen

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Thanks, I will try to fix it as soon as possible. And once this average farmer grows better crops, he would be happy to feed this chicken with better food. While editing the story, I realized that I am uncertain about what you mean by "informal," or at least, I had never considered that...
  16. Sergeandgreen

    The scale of time in fantasy stories

    I think it depends on how they legitimate their power. Lets go with cultivator stories for example (as i think those are the ones that treat time like dirt most of the time.) The foundation for their reign is their individual power. The poor people, even if united, wouldn't be able to rebel...
  17. Sergeandgreen

    Give me an action

    Tornado
  18. Sergeandgreen

    Cover Needed

    What ai are you using?
  19. Sergeandgreen

    Cover Needed

    Something like this? Took two mins with AI and didn't cost anything. I mean i would probably need a few more tries to get the hands right, but its not so much work. But even if you want ai art is fine for you you could at least be so nice and give us a bit more information than just this. The...
  20. Sergeandgreen

    Memory Manipulation

    Yeah, the plot can become quite confusing. But if you have a story that has a level of complexity where you only attract people that like to use their brains while reading, you can create a really interesting story. Especially if the reader and mc don't know it and slowly get supsicious about...
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