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  1. MakBow

    Damn bot notifications

    You ever just feel disappointed when you see that you have a message, thinking it may be a comment of someone who likes what you wrote, but when you open it, it's just a bot. Shiz's depressing
  2. MakBow

    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    I need some advice on how to write a good mystery novel. Since this is a new genre I'm tackling, I need to make know some of the things to keep in mind (Context: It will be a Mystery, Drama, Fantasy, Steampunk)
  3. MakBow

    Opening Scene

    How powerful or good do you think this opening scene is? Context SLAM! CRASH! In the room of a young lad who had begun to throw himself around his room, grabbing at his own face like an animal who had been infected by rabies, screaming in utter agony. “GIYYYAAAAAAAAAAAH!” He screamed, his shout...
  4. MakBow

    Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods

    So, I decided to create this power system for a mystery, steampunk, horror, fantasy story I intend to make since I want to tackle the mystery and horror genre I want to know if I set a good amount of limitations and versatility [Magic System: Arcana Card] Arcana Cards are divine artifacts that...
  5. MakBow

    Introducing the boss

    I hope I did this right; I would like any feedback for me to change it: --- Using his shield, Soo would defend his team against every other arrow that came their way. Bennett used his shield to reflect them at the archers, who were suspended in the air because of Soo’s assault... STRIKE...
  6. MakBow

    Story Feedback

    You read it, you know it: Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub Tell if you find it enjoyable to read and what you like or dislike
  7. MakBow

    MC Villain who is the Übermensch

    So, in my side novel that I write for more deep characters while I post my current, more surface level novel, I have this idea of my villain MC who I feel has a good basis for some peak writing, philosophical debates, etc. (Not that I think I'm good enough to execute them perfectly) He was a...
  8. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    So, I decided to make this for my side cultivation novel, and I realize this is a perfect way to keep be able to rise the tensions while also giving strong people aura as well as making the heavens more involved in the plot than just being there for the sake of being there: Venerable...
  9. MakBow

    Villian Protagonist

    Do you like em or hate em? Me personally, if they are good. I like when a villain protagonist has to go against the "Protagonist" of that era, being righteous and all that while the MC needs to be cold and cunny, a perfect foil to the 'MC' of the world. Only problem from what I see is that...
  10. MakBow

    Power System I Made For Fun (I May Use It)

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
  11. MakBow

    So I love making power systems for fun, Vermina Cultivation, my most ambitious one yet and most complicated one ever

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
  12. MakBow

    When writing slow burners...

    Do you ever feel like you just want to get to the next point in the story, but you HAVE to take things slow unless you risk ruining the pacing, especially when you're trying to write a slow burner?
  13. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    So, at the moment, as I write my active novel, the one I'm posting currently, on the side, I write novel I haven't posted, mainly there to keep my brain fresh with its own plot. (It also helps me with the new writing style I'm trying so that's another thing.) --- Synopsis Li Huang, a young man...
  14. MakBow

    Getting paid on Wattpad

    Is Wattpad a good place to try and get paid on? I read the story notes, but IDK, it's a little vague, at least for me
  15. MakBow

    Dantian Creation

    So, for the novel I write on the side to help keep my mind fresh, a xianxia novel, I wrote my MC creating his Dantian. Who do you think? Context He would draw qi from the surrounding area slowly, taking a deep breath and opening the meridians, and then gulping as if he were swallowing qi...
  16. MakBow

    Y'all Think I Can Pull off a Four-way War?

    So, for my Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub novel, I already know how it's going to end and everything, but the thing is...it's going to be a four-way war between my MC, and like three other antagonists (Not the full context) I don't intend to change the ending, but...y'all...
  17. MakBow

    What are your thoughts on this?

    So, basically in my novel. I have this idea that I'll have the MC's love interest be brought back, but as someone different, with some semblance of who she once was Context The MC, Ethan, is trying to bring back his love interest, Kim, from a Coma (Called the Mana Disease), where her soul...
  18. MakBow

    Story Feedback and Reaction

    Alright, now that I reached 20 chapters posted, I'm posting this to get some feedback and reaction to see how people like it soooooooooo, go wild. What I really want to know: Are you entertained? What you can add: IDK Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub
  19. MakBow

    Y'all think I should try a Sugar Mommy harem?

    You heard me, a Sugar Mommy harem, older women, 37 and older, meeting with the MC who's broke, rich as well, pampering him with gifts and other thing, meanwhile the MC gets emotion development from them all. The 'mature women' harem doesn't get enough love as far as I'm aware.
  20. MakBow

    Power System Rating

    [Power System: Cultivation] In the bodies of all living things exists Meridians, which can be used to circulate mana throughout the entire body, allowing one to awaken as a hunter and depending on their talent, it determines what they awaken as and how strong they can become Methods Mana...
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