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  1. EngineGear

    Writing Need tips and notes for writing Battle Academies for Adventurers

    1. What is the era? Sci-Fi with fantasy elements, Think Final Fantasy XV mixed with Overwatch and Star Wars 2. What is the academy's premier superpower? Summoning Magic, Barrier Magic, Weaponized Automotons. 3. What is the reason for its existence? From hunting demons to fighting off...
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    Helping fellow authors

    Here's my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/315598/radiant-cross-voyage--volume-/
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    One question about writing a villain:

    Caesar Blackwood He started as a street urchin who slowly rose to the ranks of the criminal underworld To remain on top of the criminal underworld Survival and Ambition Some are loyal, others want a paycheck Promises of rising up top and giving society the middle finger Charisma...
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    One question about writing a villain:

    My character's not evil for the sake of it. He's got standards. He'll cut ties with anything and anyone that'll be a liability in the future. He will kill that person out of necessity. He won't outright lie, but that's not going to stop him from telling half-truths. He's an antagonist.
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    One question about writing a villain:

    I have this crime boss villain. He's charismatic as he is ruthless, and he knows when to call quits when the situation goes south. If, for some reason, he got possessed an ancient soul of a warrior who's been fighting evil for generations, would that ruin the character?
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    Free Character Sketch

    Here's my OC: Priscilla Langston E Cup Amazon hips Six-pack
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    It was her father's fault. He owned some loan sharks money and had the "brilliant" idea to sell out his kids to the mafia. While Vino wasn't too fazed, Sapphire hated this arrangement and never forgave him. No matter how much she worked, she never got respect, not even from her brother. After...
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    Yeah. I agree. Even though she worked hard to gain respect. She made a bold, yet stupid mistake and the deaths of her daughter and husband were karma coming back to bite her in the ass. She moved far away, changed her name, and it still didn't work. Now that mistake is haunt her forever. By...
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    His sister had a good reason to leave. The mafia treated her like dogshit as a child, and Vino let happened, not once helping her.
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    Viktor Dragovich: Ex-Special Forces turned mercenary. Has anger issues, is a major victim complex, and is an attention-seeking bastard. He was disowned by his own country and now seeks revenge. (Callsign: Tungsten Epta) Traits: wrath, pettiness, egomania, overconfidence, cruelty...
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    Let's just say he idolizes his grandmother to an exaggerated degree. He's bound to retell his grandma's stories, even though a sentence would be enough.
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    A better link, hopeful: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/315598/radiant-cross-voyage--volume-/ Daniel's no brat either. He's nice and well-meaning, but he can get a bit reckless when it comes to action. That's his main character flaw. Something he has to fix and reign in.
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Please share your thoughts on my synopsis: Title: Radiant Cross Voyage Synopsis: Daniel Estimar had always dreamed of being an adventurer, seeking out dangerous and exciting experiences, fighting giant monsters; all that good stuff. To say he was excited that he was accepted early into his...
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    He did cause property damage, in my book, that's a warrant for arrest.
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    Random crazy shit can happen, just like No More Heroes.
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    I just published the first chapter of my story and looking for feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/315598-radiant-cross-voyage--volume-/chapter/350255/
  17. EngineGear

    Writing Critique my main protagonists

    Daniel Estimar: muh adventure Cairo Hawkins: muh chill Yolanda Arias: muh lazy Mika Valkrana: muh tsundere Ryunosuke Kawasaki: muh shy
  18. EngineGear

    Writing Critique My Magic Systems

    Simple. Rule of Cool. I was also inspired by Hunter x Hunter. Hence the Japanese words.
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    Writing Critique My Magic Systems

    Let me correct myself My story has a post-modern setting. So, Not really out of place.
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