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Not good grammar mostly means you definitely don't read enough and isn't competent in english enough. Don't begin writing, fix your grammar first. Don't patch your mistakes with AI, you won't grow anyways if you do that. I would recommend reading chinese novels such as Reverend Insanity, The...

I don't think you read too much, judging from how you write in this forum. PS: Why is there spaces before your comma. --> blabla , blabla -> TF? Just use blabla, blabla Try to always write in format. Big S at the start, dot at the end, and clarity, not clearity. Poetic nature is VERY AI-ish...

No??? I told you twice that piece doesn't make sense. MAKE MORE SENSE wdym imperfection? Dawg why do I need to explain this someone help

Yo guys sorry for taking a long time Review #2: _______________________________ # Overview The cover is cool, but the small text that you added isn't necessary since they can't be viewed if you don't intentionally look at the cover. The title is really long, but that's fine. However...

Make more sense? I already mentioned why it could be mistaken for AI writing.

Whether a piece of literature is AI is always arguable. However, whether it resembles AI writing is different. For these specifically, I'm going to say yes it does resemble AI writing, because it makes no sense if we heavily analyze it. This piece is told from a first person perspective...

I still have a LOT of stories to review from my thread, so I'm not gonna review your chapter itself. However, a quick look into your story and you will find that: 1. Chapter 1's title formatting is messed up and is inconsistent. 2. Your blurb doesn't tell much beside bro got vision, also you...

For now, tragedy

Dang that's pretty good, until her mother starts lecturing her about the test. ... Thinking it again, this is probably something that mothers might actually do

_________________________________________________ First of all, the title of your story on the website and on your cover is different. The title on your cover doesn't have 'a' before 'dodge rate'. The cover being the MC(?) with / without the title of the story is pretty standard, so that's...

Damn thats a lot of replies, I’ll review these later alright

Oh, I see I see, thank you. Why did they make the coding for the forums and for the stories different dawg

Announcement: For the past few days, I have realized that doing these semi-objective reviews are actually making me enjoy stories less. :blob_pat_sad: I don't know how, maybe because it changed my mindset on reading entirely, but this isn't exactly good news for me. Therefore, I will be stopping...

If you update / rewrite or something along the lines you can DM me again, I'll give feedback again then if I have time. I feel like your concept have potential + comparatively speaking, your writing is actually not that bad

Here's my honest thoughts while reading this: 1. Why does it not go all the way? This looks so cursed 2. The paragraphs are too damn long, holy hell 3. In the first paragraph, Aetherford University dormitory --> why is there 2 space and why is the dormitory not with caps 4. Mr. Igarashi...

How does it work though? Does this mean the normal animals become horrendous or what?

Yes. It's as the title says. Why can't spoilers that are put on our stories have titles just like in the forums? It will be really helpful, especially for formatting LitRPG stuff.

To me, the most important part is 3. Whatever method they use, what matters is what it causes, aka what each actions does to drive the scene forward.

Sprinkle some comedy here and there and you should be good to go

I don’t have money man