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  1. Hadassah

    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Ha, I’m so used to being in the trad publishing trenches that I was trying to figure out how synopsis was used in this context for a bit. Anyway Muddy, you’ve been so kind as to give detailed feedback to others, I wanted to offer for you. So first off, I love the name of the character. It's...
  2. Hadassah

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I'd be more than obliged if you took a look at my story, Free Agent. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/267415/free-agent/ So obliged that I wanted to make sure to return the favor. I took a look at the first chapter of Syche. (I am skipping the prologue per your own rules, not sure if its a...
  3. Hadassah

    Any good sentient NPC novel?

    Well, currently my ongoing novel is about a world who’s natives are about 60% certain they are a computer simulation created and occasionally puppeted by an invisible system to serve as backdrop to the outsiders masquerading as superheroes. Everyone is ‘sentient’, but the locals are all slaves...
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