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Just read three of your chapters, again, a speed read, not because of a random read, but it's because I read very fast. First of all, as usual, let's begin with the title. Search of Tempest. Not bad. Second, genre: Now that's a lot, but congratulations, you nailed most of them. Since there...

There's no point putting a fight scene if one does not know how to fight.

Well if you want to ask for a feedback next time, make sure you put in the inciting stuff first before you ask. Like I wrote, it's an example. There's no need to put it right off the bat. But at least, give hints or include something that would make it look supernatural so that this won't look...

Just read 4 of your chapters. A speed read, actually. So here's the thing I want to ask, what is your work about? First, I would start with the title: Wow, Succubus & Maverick. Second, genre: Supernatural/Mystery. Nothing wrong with that. Third, synopsis: Collin St. Rex is a 17 year-old...

You deleted it?

I'm here to collect different feedbacks. @3guanoff thanks in advance. Genre: Fantasy URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/ Feedback...

I can't believe I even drew a map.

https://discord.gg/QQR4gCQD Saw this after two years, lol.

Yes, sometimes, you would get something like a 'Eureka'. You get a really damn good scene in your head. So write down whatever you have. Think and see where it could fit into the story. However, it can't fit into the story just yet, so you save it up for later use. That's how I do it though.

Mine's fantasy, but I rely on logic and balance in power. The greater the power borrowed, the greater the backlash. The stronger the magic, the longer the chant time. But my story is something like telling about how fate could connect people...

Suggestions: Who is this dragon? Anything to do with your work? If no, then what's the point putting a dragon? If yes, then no, it's not decent enough. It's just a colourless dragon head. At least learn how to sketch first.

Name: LuciferVermillion Status: Depends whether I'm interested Portfolio (Social media): That can discuss after I accepted the job Commission Prices: No idea. We can have a discussion. Didn't knew the price could go so high. Examples:

You might need some repositioning at the eyes. Unless you didn't separate the skin and eyes into different layers, you can easily solve this with just a lasso. So what are you trying to bring out here? The dragon's strongest gift-- faiya? I also saw how the sword behind the waist looks like a...

He really scrapped it with an alien.

Please give mine a try. I guess this is rather character focused. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

It's been a while since I could see a user that is actually reading and giving actual roasting (review). This might sound stupid, but please roast me Tempokai-sama. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/ Not sure, but my genre is...

Hello, I've created a discord server for my work. Here is the discord link.

Hello, I've created a discord server for my work. Here is the discord link.

Hello, I've created a discord server for my work. Here is the discord link.

Discord link to my novel: https://discord.gg/EsJGEzhK