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Hi I saw you post and gave it a read. I would give grammar 6/10 storyline 9/10 unique start 9/10 Sentence flow 4/10 overall 6.5/10 (This is my personal opinion and am not trying to be rude to your hard work in anyway) Thoughts: The hook was interesting of him read a generic story, the...

I will win!!!

Well I have a maybe good idea of a story in my head it’s not about beginning weak it’s more about past actions and big end game fights and the morality on the Main character and his thoughts as well cool fights that’s all I got off the top of my head anyone have clues I could go to iron out the...

A mysterious stranger entered the room and Looked into the room void of light and slipped on poop and face planted right into a mug of poop.

I also remember reading a story in middle school that I found weird that was in the school library it was a manga and I forgot the name but it was the story about the boy who was lazy about painting a fence and convincing other kids to do it for him and giving him stuff. Near the end of the...

“Fuck this was a bad day” “Hmm I see red” “*barf/blargh drip drop that was nast-“ Personal opinion

You can set up the chapters and split them in two so it looks like it just ends when everything is there in the next chapter that way you have more to flex and create on how things progress as well add more detail, I think that might help don’t know really not a writer

I would also like something similar I used to find something interesting every time I get on SH now my days are full of boredom and work. I’m not a writer but I think a cool story could be about how the main protagonist goes cryptic trying to find a goal in his life and he keeps asking others...

I always try to find villains and want to find a villain to where he doesn’t exist you don’t know who or what he is but he acts like a gentleman in front of but that makes it so much more dangerous. You try to search for him he will show up right behind you he wears a mask with smiles for eyes...