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  1. Little-Moon

    Review swarp please

    I find myself corrected there is someone called Ryuji, called by that name once in passing when he is greeted. Sorry it was so relatively unimportant I forgot.
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    Review swarp please

    Yes. It is. Without anyone called Ryuji in there. My only Japanese Chara is named Tanaka and he is a middle aged guy who dates his work colleague.
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    Review swarp please

    Well I don't know what you read, but it definitely was not my story. Thank you anyway. As for why it was not my Story. 1. I don't even have anyone called Ryuji in my Story. Edit: I find myself corrected there is someone called Ryuuji, mentioned in passing, greeted once. And it's the first name...
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    Review swarp please

    I am just not so much for posting at the Forums XD. Alr then, I'll try out your draft.
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    Review swarp please

    Alright, I am in and try my Luck :) I cannot guarantee for Grammatical Stuff (Suck at it) but I do hope you have fun. World Wanderer
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    LitRPG system

    Maybe try without numbers but with Ranks. Rank A, Rank B so on. What you describe sounds like a SS or an L Ranked skill, so instead of giving it concrete numbers you give it a Rank.
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    When drawing Chibi…

    You are welcome. ^^ I think that's what you call it 1:3 Ratio, but most of the time I can't decide which I find the cutest since almost all of them are XD
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    When drawing Chibi…

    1. Posing 2. Mhhh everything 3. I don't know.... I can draw my own stuff though when I want to XD so I simply did what I liked.
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    [Vent] For Authors who just need a moment to let it all out

    The people who overread the fact that I have fat letters written first of, Hey, I am not a Native of English, still comment on how awful the grammar and spelling are in rather unpleasant ways instead of simply telling me what I did wrong so I can do better or correct the mistake. I treasure the...
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    design thoughts sought

    Depends on what kind of design you want to do with the colors.
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    Writing Prompt Your Dragon Lair ?

    Books, lot's of books.....a mountain of books. Which I would spend time reading. Defended by the endless chaos of the library and my doggo. Edit: Oh and I want housekeeping fairies as minions (preferably of either gender and cute looking). That keep my place clean, cook for me, remind me to eat...
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    What are your occupation right now

    Art Student, with a part time job for survival
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    bleaching/dyeing hair?

    If I were you I'd do the bleaching part with someone helping you next time for better bleaching. The Color usually washes out easily after a few weeks so you have to dye regularily too.
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    Want Me To Look at Your Work?

    Then I'd prefer PM, I am more comfortable with that if you don't mind.
  15. Little-Moon

    Want Me To Look at Your Work?

    I am always up for a feedback exchange :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1033680/world-wanderer--the-dungeon-girl/ My story is fairly new and I want to point out I am not an Eng Native. So I would be happy on any opinion one may be able to offer and if only if it's worth a read or not...
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    If the story you are writing turns into a food, what will it be?

    Noodles with basically anything mixed along and a very cold dessert.
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    Casual reader feedback

    If you are in the mood. I would really appreciate if you came around reading my story. :) World Wanderer: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1033680/world-wanderer--the-dungeon-girl/
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    FREE REVIEW! Just subimit it, and I'll review it.

    Hi, I would be more than happy if you came around to review my story. It doesn't have many chapters yet (since it's fairly new), but it does have 10K words, so you are safe on that side, although I am unsure if it is to your taste. It has a, or at least I attempt to give it one, mature context...
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    Puppet's Feedback Thread (pay with comments)

    Thank you very much for the Criticism. It's very helpful. Don't worry, I couldn't find anything provocative, none there in my eyes. I'll try to implement what you told me as well as possible; considering what you wrote, I may rewrite a few chapters and put in more of Tallus and the other's...
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    Recommendations Some good novels to read, no Stubs please

    Depends on what Genre you are looking for
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