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Breathe in and out. In for four hold for four out for four hold for four.

I mean it’s an idea. If you want to have a villain as the protagonist as an anti villain then you’re going to have to walk a very thin line. If they’re killing people who are corrupt in order to better the city or world then thats not villain thats anti hero which isnt what you’re going for. I’d...

You could make the second one I Became a Tentacle Monster and drop the rest but it’s not really necessary. The other ones I mentioned have a : where it seems like they could drop what comes after the : and still make sense. Yours is pretty short compared to Kitsuna.

Also don’t make it too long. There’s this story on here called On Astral Tides: From Humble Freelancer To Astral Emperor. See the problem? It’s too long it’s not concise what’s wrong with On Astral Tides? Or another story I read on here called My dungeon life: rise of the slave harem. Same...

Focus on one project and at bare minimum write a very through outline with plot points and an ending before even thinking of starting something new. You do not want to end up like some authors on this site with half a dozen or more stories going simultaneously anywhere from 50-100 chapters long...

There’s this author Whatsawhizzer he has two stories World of Women and Man of the House if you want examples of an inverted world you can read those. I mostly just read his isekai dungeon girls fic. If you want some inspiration for ideas or what not to do starting there maybe a good shot. A lot...

So utopian socialism?

If you’re a new author and it’s your first story I would say that you need to release chapters consistently especially for the first 50-100 chapters after that you can slow it down a little or do mass releases of several chapters once a week. Eldoria does have some good advice. I would also say...

Plot holes. Bad grammar and punctuation annoys the cr@p out of me. MC getting too strong too quickly. Like a system story where the MC gets really strong really quickly and the author can’t create realistic challenges for the MC to drive the narrative forward.

Right my bad

My advice would be to look at other people’s writing for help. See how they write dialogue and try to copy that. I will say unless you’re trying to write a screenplay or a script then don’t write like your example. Tanenter, Yamao, and their other classmates sat down in their seats in the...

Depends on the number of reviews if it’s on a few then no I won’t read unless I like the excerpt or the tags. If it’s more than 50+ reviews then I know that it has a broad appeal.

Winter. But I grew up in Alaska so it’s either winter or a northern summer

Dude seriously I wanted to help you but seriously the just the first one is so long. Okay checked the next couple not as long but seriously too long. Blerbs dude blerbs especially since you're asking for people for their opinion on 17. Summarize try again with fewer and you might actually get...

The wind blew through gaps in the walls, lightning flashed thru the cracked windows, and thunder rattled the entire house down to its foundations.

I used to talk to myself more. But nowadays I say stuff to myself when I remember I have to do something or I’ve forgotten something or I’m an idiot for forgetting something. So it’s not really weird talking to yourself as long as you don’t argue with yourself aloud like you have two minds...

There are a lot of novels on this site that petter out before chapter 50 so unless a title or cover catches my eye I won’t read it until it reaches closer to 50 because it’s kinda disheartening to read a story you think has potential and then the author abruptly stops writing or gets burned out...

Footnotes are more academic where this is casual writing. Not a ton of modern authors use footnotes unless its for more detailed explanations about stuff on the page. Most writers nowadays just explain everything that doesn't make sense so there's no need.

Do consistent chapter posts. Not large ones just one a day or every two days. When you get a following you can extend that longer as you have a large regular fanbase to read it, recommend it, and rate it which makes it pop up higher on tag leaderboards which makes more people see and so on and...

You need a decent cover you don't need to hire an artist to make one but at the very least a good gpt or find something on google images. If you go the AI go for a description of your main character or one of your female characters. Just checked your story page the one you've got there is good...