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Can u try reading it again? i spent like like 2 hours revising it and fixed tons of grammar mistakes and formatting

Cool Thanks for feedback. Tbh apart from English essays ive never written anything bigger than 500 words b4 so i have no clue what im doing Greyblob thanks for your feedback, and imma rewrite sections of it

Hi! My name isEdd99 and today I wrote the first chapter of Assassins Apocalypse. Its probably really shit, however, i always wanted to make a LitRPG novel as i have been reading them for years. I was wondering if anybody would like to take a look at it. It is about an assassin in a system...