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I appreciate you for the feedback. Spending most of my time either at work or learning to write has made me forget how a conversation is supposed to sound, so I'm glad to hear my dialogue made to the okay category at least. As for the tense issues, they just slip my mind and mix together for...

Been working non stop to improve, but it seems like I hit a wall. Be honest with your criticism, but try not to be too harsh because I'm built to cry easily. Also, I love reading stories, so if you wanna drop your story down here for me to review also feel free. I'm terrible at really giving...

They're definitely entertaining, but I don't wanna have small talk with Randy Orton.

Probably been asked before, but how do you make dialog less scripted. I've done that "just say it out loud" stuff that others said, but it still feels stiff when I come back and read it.