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The first five chapters of my book is the mc trying his best to help others but losing because he is outmatched. The middle of the book is him training and dealing with the cards he was dealt. Meeting new friends and investigating until the midpoint. The ending of the book is him getting a win.

For me, I keep getting he is okay or not bad, but he needs more. At worst I heard was that he was boring, or lacked aura. If he already has the basic stuff: a goal, challenges, flaws, what is the missing piece? How do you turn an okay or meh mc to one that the reader will get excited over?

I try to minimize my use of dialogue tags by using stage direction and removing them if the conversation is between two people . When I do use dialog tags I try to stick with said..

1. What is meaning "peace" to your protagonist? Doing his part in society to help people. 2. Who are worth protecting? The citizens of his country. 3. Who are threats/enemies? His godfather, his godfather's apprentice, and criminals who use their powers to hurt people. 4. How does your...

Margarine is for people who are too impatient to wait for butter to soften.

To have my book picked for a weekly book club.

Most of those writers were bored rich people writing for other bored rich people, since the peasants could hardly read.

Things I learned when writing my novel: -Magic and Mystery is hard to mix, because magic breaks logic and you can end up angering your readers. You either have to make your story a standard murder mystery with a wizard using magic to solve it. Like the Eyes' Have it or the Dresden files...

Meteor hammers

Thank you

Old sketch back when Casimir was Ivan.

Congrats on this new and exciting step on your writing journey. I had trouble finishing longer stories, until I completed my first book, that was around 60K. Now for me, writing a book from start to finish is a lot easier, but revising it still come difficult. As my beta reader who helped...

Whole milk. I add a little bit of brown sugar for sweetness.

Ty the Tasmanian Tiger 3, because I found that the devs had to cut out most of the content due to money, technical and time restraints. Sadly, I felt it in the game played with the rehashed missions. I want to see the game how the devs planned. They also cut a lot of content from TY2 but that...

Milk tea

He looks like he is about to burst a blood vessel. Very good.