I think that part of your missing enjoyment is that you're talking about MMORPG's. In my opinion they fucking suck. However, I do love JRPG's, Strategy RPG's, and some others. MMORPG's have way too much to learn and remember but some people might like the complexity. Some people just like a good...
My view on the thing is that teenager is probably a bit too young but if both were in their twenties it's perfectly fine. We have girls around 25 dating old rich men in real life after all. My own parents have a gap of 15 years between their ages. Since you don't really mentally mature after a...
Thinking about this actually is what inspired me to write one my novels. During a podcast I was watching people were talking about superpowers with no limitations and it surprised me how nobody said anything about being able to create anything. So many opportunities for loopholes. Eventually i...
I'm really good at coming up with new ideas on the spot and accidentally foreshadowing. One of my stories had a prologue that was supposed to be one chapter. 8 chapters later I had finally finished the prologue because I kept changing where my story was supposed to go which made my story better...
I don't even have friends online and I barely interact with my family. So I imagine my readers might get disappointed that I died before finishing my books but aside from that nobody really knows about my existence.
Yeah I haven't developed upon it in my story yet, but Earth is one of the best elements because it has way too much versatility no matter where it's used. Whether it's outside of combat, attacking, or defending the Earth element is really OP.
I've always made a bunch of dumb typos like that because when I learned how to type I was taught to prioritize speed over accuracy. So now I'm stuck with a typing habit that makes me have to check over my chapters 2-3 times before I can be confident that I managed to fix all the mistakes that my...
Simple words is fine, just try not to keep using the same word over and over. The main thing to remember is, "Do I have to google what this word means?" Not very many people would want to constantly stop reading to google definitions.
It might not be the best way to describe the angry person who doesn't care but one way to do it is by having some other character point out those artistic type things and then have the angry person say they don't much care for them and give a reason why. Examples could be stuff like "I just...
Yeah if you're gonna include something from another one of your works it should only be something like "Hey this character or famous event was something that happened in a different book." It's a way to nod at your previous works without making it necessary to read them to understand the plot...
Thanks for telling me. Though it sucks that my character description needs to be a few paragraphs long because everything I'm describing is a physical change that happened because of something in the character's past or something that will be relevant in the future. For example character is...
I feel like I'm doing decently successful but nobody has actually given me a review on what is good about my story and what I should improve about it so I'm asking for help from here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/421562/journey-to-become-a-great-spirit/
I finally finished writing a bunch of changes to my character's physical appearance and I'm finally getting around to going into great detail about what my character looks like so I wanna know what exactly I should describe. I know about hair colour and height. My character will mainly look the...
I don't update multiple novels just because I'm only working on one right now. However I've been writing 2-4 chapters a day because I don't have anything better to do with my life so they might be like me in that regard.
I think I only have about fifty readers but it's still insane that people actually care about what I'm writing. Especially since I am currently just winging the entire plot because I was too lazy to figure out where I wanted to take my story. I don't want to disappoint anyone because I was too...