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Is it pleasant?

I just finished revising the final chapter of my book. Tomorrow I'll schedule the last few chapters for posting and then ... and then ... it's all over?

But I just wrote a scene with lots of aggressive hand holding. It's practically an orgy of sweaty palms.

But how do I make shitting compelling?

I just finished revising the chapter that was the ending in my first draft. The protagonist uses a spell that renders him unconscious but he hopes will deal a mortal blow to the enemy. Then I picked up in an epilogue where apparently much went on while he was out, only some of which is...

I know. It's so frustrating. People have actually accused me of lying because the stats say 2 chapters per week even though in my description I say once per week (which is how often I actually update.)

Tad, a goblin, couldn't expect more from life than the honor of toiling among the gears and cranks of the Machines Works in service of his Dread Lord. It seemed enough for his elderly boss, Glum. After Tad pulls the pair into a drunken brawl between orcs, including the rebellious Hohza, they...

Sure. That's why I asked for feedback.

Still plugging away. People generally seem to feel that the current cover, which I'd class as "weird," is the best option. Still, I like exploring ideas. Here's the final version of one of the ideas I presented before. A brand new one which shows the first meeting of the two main characters...

no. What would be the point?

I threw some terms in there early on but have let it fall behind. It's a neat feature.

Mmm. Minty fresh villain.

If I can get down 800 words I'm happy.

There's an idea! What if you introduce a new villain in part 2, but he's pretty much the same villain from Part 1 because of branding? "But we already killed Dark Deathdood!" "No, you don't get it, Dark Deathdood isn't just one guy ... it's a franchise!"

What kind of eldritch horror is this? Are authors actually employing AI to produce filler for their books?

If I don't write I'll get bored.

Thanks. I was also told my blurb was too generic, bordering on boring. I had tried too had to keep from spoiling anything in the previous version. It was this: This is my new one:

I've been told that my current cover, with the battle plans text and building on it, is too bland to draw in readers. However I felt it was a good indicator of the humor and tone of the story. I was advised to emphasize waifus, but there's only two women in the book and neither is presented as...