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  1. Localforeigner

    Why do many authors use covers that they got from Google?

    Canva is great! And that is a fantastic cover!
  2. Localforeigner

    Post Your Best Line Below

    One of my favorites "The wall of televisions all showed the same image. Angels."
  3. Localforeigner

    I need help with my Hero Classes

    Light-Paladin/Cleric Life-Healer Earth-Warden (defensive warrior that uses power to trap/hold opponents) Wind-Archer Fire-Pyromancer Justice-Inquisitor Anvils/Blacksmiths-Artificer Shelter/Protection-Defender/Tank
  4. Localforeigner

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    LOL, okay! Yeah, the font was really fucking weird and I couldn't find a way on Canva to vertical text other than that one box. When I pressed in any closer to force the apostrophe to maybe look more correct, it just ended up making the text box look worse. ;( Maybe I'll just remove it entirely.
  5. Localforeigner

    Recommendations Post Female MC recommendations.

    Thanks! If you get a chance, I hope you enjoy it. The cover is a new one...I used to have a different one but this one seems to be more well liked than the previous one. I took a CC piece of art and then artfully cropped it, so it was free too. :biggrin_s:
  6. Localforeigner

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Wow...thank you so much! I am floored and honored. I really, really appreciate it! Like, I'm buzzing now, thank you so much! ???????? Re: the apostrophe...I was trying to establish ownership, as in the dirge belongs to the Angel. The font makes it look like it's between the E and the L. Or did...
  7. Localforeigner

    Your last played Video Game character has to kill you in 24hrs

    My Chosen Undead Faith build is going to rip me apart...
  8. Localforeigner

    Recommendations Post Female MC recommendations.

    Please take a look at mine. Contemporary action fantasy, bit of Apocalypse and super powers going on. Link in the sig!
  9. Localforeigner

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If you are still doing this and open to it, I would love it if you took a look at what I have up. Links in the sig. Cheers!
  10. Localforeigner

    What's a good views/chapter reads ratio?

    No, the difference between an amateur and a professional is that professional writers get paid. An amateur could write 16 hours a day their entire life, but if they aren't getting paid for it, they are just an amateur or a hobbyist by definition.
  11. Localforeigner

    Free Story Criticisms

    Don't know if it's your cup of tea, but I'll toss mine in here for review. Thank you! Link is in the sig.
  12. Localforeigner

    Recommendations A mc who genuinely cares about others.

    My MC starts as a misanthropic loner but eventually learns to trust people and put herself on the line for others, even if she kicks herself while she's doing it. Link in the Sig.
  13. Localforeigner

    Recommendations Fighter/ gunslinger type MC

    Well, in my story I have an MC who is supernaturally strong and mostly trained to fight in hand to hand. She also ends up using a 20mm anti-material rifle against angels if that sounds up your ally. She has yet to fight a sword user but there are angels that use melee weapons later in the...
  14. Localforeigner

    Recommendations Novels with beautiful physically strong and muscular general female characters

    My novel's MC fits most of those bills. She's not overly muscular in appearance because her strength is supernatural, however as the novel progresses she certainly becomes more physically fit due to training. She's definitely not a joke character! She is ridiculously strong for her size and in...
  15. Localforeigner

    Minacia's First Chapter Feedback

    Sure, I'll have a go if this is still going? Story in the sig!
  16. Localforeigner

    Noob looking for advice

    Yeah, those are the feedback things I was talking about. What I was asking if people offered to review each other's works, as in, leave a review on the work itself (like I read your story and I will give it 4.5*s or whatever) rather than just give a critique on the forum. Like a forum critique...
  17. Localforeigner

    Noob looking for advice

    Another question: Are review swaps a thing on SH? I've seen them on Royal Road, but other than people offering feedback, I don't see anyone talking about actually offering to review each other's work?
  18. Localforeigner

    Thank you! Never has a reader given me a poem before! :blob_aww:

    Thank you! Never has a reader given me a poem before! :blob_aww:
  19. Localforeigner

    Noob looking for advice

    Out of curiosity, why would every other day help get to trending instead of posting everyday? All right, good to know! Thank you so much!
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