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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    I don't know how to answer you on each part, but thank you very much, I wait for other points of view before I do something, thanks for the effort. I understood several of the points if it is true that I had and still have a problem with the tenses of the verbs but good advice, for the other...
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    THE BEGINNING OF IT ALL: The day of Calenmir’s assumption – CH22

    hello sincerely i am a bit overwhelmed, i could use the sincere opinion of other readers to know if there is a good or bad guy in the story, i have been creating it since i was 8 years old and i care a lot about the narrative. I would love to receive opinions, whether they are contrary or...
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    Recommendations The Shattered Throne: A Tale of Vengeance and Corruption

    ah donde bro ah ok, where should I post it bro ?
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    Recommendations The Shattered Throne: A Tale of Vengeance and Corruption

    In a world where power corrupts both the land and the soul, the ruthless Queen Calenmir of Zephyria seeks to reclaim her stolen territories, forging uneasy alliances with the cunning Cleopatra Ushnar of Astoria. But as their ambitions clash, a greater darkness looms—the Corruption, a force that...
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    hello i am developing a seinen and i would like to get feedback to continue the story.

    Hello if you are interested in this story, I would be happy if you tell me what you think about it so I can imagine how to continue, I hope you like this fantasy story, I took the time to build a rich and wide world, give the characters an interesting development, I hope it catches you and if...
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    AI opinion

    as good sir said if you leave what you should write to an AI you are a reader not an author, I use AI a lot to get ideas, names, understand some questions, it is easier to find synonyms, debate ideas, and most of the time it gives me a complete list and I don't use any but I get a better idea...
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    I just made the best cover of my life, and I need opinions?

    yes I agree This is very useful thank you
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    I just made the best cover of my life, and I need opinions?

    Thanks for the opinion, yes I will take it into account, but, the flat is for lack of shadows on the head, it didn't make much sense to add it seeing the direction of the light, but the nose and all that, after the added effects I didn't see much problem, but well.... and my intention was to...
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    I just made the best cover of my life, and I need opinions?

    OK my boss? thank you, next time I will apply the corrections
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    Hi, I'm just getting the hang of the forums, I didn't even know they were this active.

    Hi, I'm just getting the hang of the forums, I didn't even know they were this active.
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    hello I am new, this is my first time using a forum and I hardly understand the basics of how it...

    hello I am new, this is my first time using a forum and I hardly understand the basics of how it works.
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