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Don’t worry. I’m a new author as well. I’ve only got a couple of comments on my chapters but what matters to me is that people take some time out of their schedules to read my work even though it’s sloppy at the beginning. With more readers you’ll eventually get more comments. Good luck! Let’s...

It’s okay ?☺️Just mention that it’s a joke response next time. Some ppl like me take such things way too seriously and rev their brains into overdrive tiring themselves out.

@Saileri Why the angry react? It was an easter egg ref.

You care about him as much as an NTR protag cares about the man they ntr’d their women from.

My novel basically has the Seven Deadly Sins and the Seven Virtues. I want to know what element would they specialize in. Like Wrath - Fire Pride - Ice Gluttony, Sloth, Greed, Lust and Envy Oh and since there are too many seven virtues when I surfed the web, I’m listing the ones in my novel...

“I’m sick and tired of this life”, he said. “Why don’t you just go and kill yourself then”, she replied and she regrets it to this day as she spends her life as a HikiNeet never to be isekai’d.

I’d like a general review please. I’m a new writer and this is my first novel so I’m sure there are gonna be a lot(and by that I mean a lot) of places to improve on I think. Constructive criticism will help me a lot I guess. Thank you for spending your time for reading this. Here’s the link to...

True that It’s just how we word and phrase it giving everyone their dose of dopamine!

Yup, there’s gonna be a separation arc. In due time ? Typical cliche right??

Hmm. Episodic training/studying snipets with a tour at the end. And then a school arc for her to open up to others in which she drags MC along with her. How does that sound?

That is what I’m struggling with. She still talks politely and although that has decreased somewhat there is that hint of reservation she has when asking questions. Of course there are moments when her emotions and curiosity take over and she bluntly asks them but I want to make a smooth...

She did repress her emotions, or rather she didn’t feel much emotions given her life in the palace without any love and care in her upbringing.

World building chapters are 8 and 9. Here’s the link to 8. Here. Yes, heroine got isekai’d to mc world. MC asked if she wanted to go back where she refused as well. I think 8 and 9 will help you get a proper jist of the circumstances of the world and mc’s strength. P.S. mc is over 9000 yrs...

MC and heroine are both smart and quick on the uptake. Both had shitty pasts, MC case of child abandonment while heroine was the daughter of a concubine the king married in her kingdom leading to harassment, slander and all from her tutors and maids. MC stopped caring about what others thought...

Well the title already kinda explains it. I want to write a scene where my MC (from japan around 16yr physically but over 9000yrs old) takes the heroine (10yrs old in 5yr old loli body that got rev. isekai’d) to sightsee. I want to realistically portray her reactions and emotions as well as...

Thnx, but your artwork seems more suited for space n sci-fi novels whereas mine is more fantasy slice of life so I’ll have to politely decline. P.S. Dayum cool artwork though! You can probably charge for that ya know.

Thnx a lot! I can use it in a future chapter(50 or 100ish?) as she grows older. Btw, new chap in 2hrs! Check out my novel! »Prologue«

Meh. I’ve had my fair share of reality checks. Was worth a shot though. Thnx for going along.

I can use some constructive opinions/advice. Who am I kidding. I also want some views and Readers. Here Nanashi — The Nameless Conceptual’s Tale

Welp, here you have it. Nanashi — The Nameless Conceptual’s Tale