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Handle Sensitive Content of Mother's Childbirth As the title above, I want to narrate the scene meaningfully, emotionally, and not exploitatively. I want to respect a mother's struggle. I already have a reference but I'm not sure how to implement it precisely. What do you think? I'd love to...

Imagine the following two plot scenarios: (1) World influences MC. The world here is alive, has a social system, and has characters other than MC. Conflict in a location can create a chain reaction that can ultimately affect MC's life. For example, a war between kingdoms causes the...

Reader Tolerance in Principle of "Show it, Don't Tell it" in Narrating Scene Elements In fiction writing, we are familiar with the principle of "show it, don't tell it", which involves the reader in the story (immersion). However, in practice, almost no fiction can apply this principle...

I mean, as an author, you might draw on real-world references for your character's bacground and physical appearance. What nationality would you use as your protagonist's identity?

Error Tolerance Between Story Content, Storytelling and Language Story content is what is told in fiction, including characters, worldbuilding, plot, and conflict. Storytelling is how the story's content is conveyed to the reader through narration so that the author's imagination can be...

What do you think about yandere villainess as an antagonist to the protagonist?

In line with the question above, I'd like to hear your thoughts. There are no right or wrong answers here, just sharing your opinions.

You can calculate the engagement of your work on SH and RR, then compare them. For example: On SH, your fiction has 40k views, 200 readers, and 10 ratings. Meanwhile, on RR, your fiction has 10K views, 10 followers (readers), and 2 ratings. You can ignore favorites because the parameters...

Multiple POV vs. Single POV Which fiction do you prefer to read as a reader? Which fiction do you prefer to write as an author?

Attention Span Tolerance for Min-Max Number of Sentences in a Paragraph Please state your opinion in the following format, for example: A maximum attention span of five sentences per paragraph for atmospheric description; A minimum of a sentence per paragraph for sharp dialogue in battle scene.

Feedback for Handling Sensitive Content Well, I make a feedback request for chapters with dark, sensitive, heavy and emotional content. I'm not sure if I've handled these kinds of chapters wisely considering my series is starting to reach an emotional climax. Here's one of the darkest...

Feedback for A Little Daughter Character Well, I rewrote one of my chapters with the first POV from a little girl's perspective. Here is the result: My questions are: How old do you think Caelan El Rose is (actual age)? How is Caelan El Rose's character in this chapter? How adorable do you...

Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said...", "...Annie said, patting Barry's shoulder," "...the blonde girl complained," etc, can provide quick navigation in identifying who is speaking while providing...

Peace in Fiction Achieving peace has become a cliché motivation in mainstream fiction. For example, in isekai fiction, the protagonist defeating the demon king is considered a quick way to achieve world peace. In superhero fiction... the demon king is replaced by a supervillain. Some dark...

Who is the character you use as the gold standard in narrating the main antagonist in your fiction?

What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

Journey of A New Author... Every author begins writing fiction with the first ink stroke (or finger tap). Even best-selling authors... began their journey by learning to write fiction. Therefore, what differentiates between stablished authors and new authors is simply "experience." When it...

My question is, what kind of feedback would you like to improve your narrative?

Managing Named Characters in a Dense Chapter Imagine you're writing a character-heavy scene. For example, a crowd scene, a dungeon party scene, or a battlefield scene involving many characters. As authors, we can remember every character's name, appearance, personality, and role in the...

Feedback to Measure the Reader's Perception of Character Identifier Could you help me gauge how readers perceive multiple characters in a chapter? I'd like to know how causal readers identify characters in a narrative. If you'd like, please follow these instructions: 1. Read only the chapter...