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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    Ah ok, I stopped a bit too soon then ? Will check those tonight
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    @Bartun Like I said, I had gotten up through Chapter 3 beyond the intro and prologue stuff. Pluses: I enjoy the detail and depth to the society and the world you created (real nice job in general) Didn't take long to figure out the personalities and character dynamics of the main cast For...
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    @Bartun I've read through chapter 3. I can comment here or if you prefer some other method let me know
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    Thanks man, no rush. If it's cool with you,I will check yours out in the mean time to pay Zirrboy's favor forward.
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    Much appreciated, then, man. Let me know in the future when you do and I will gladly check it out.
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    Do you have a story link you can give me? @Zirrboy
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    Adding to the very-thin Mecha Genre

    I did. I didnt mean to insinuate that you wanted the absolute minimum. I was just simply telling you that as it was just matter of fact, and maybe you would like to know ahead of time? lol But no main reason I replied was just to confirm that there was no non-hetero romance, mostly because one...
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    Adding to the very-thin Mecha Genre

    Thanks!!! Absolutely zero of what you said, and the hetero romance that is there is minimal to the point it's only what is necessary to move the characters forward. And when I say minimal, I mean the meaning of the relationship is clearly shown but I don't show what happens if you get what I...
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    I appreciate the feedback. I will get right to your story as well. You know I don't take any offense one bit. To be honest, I have (after lots of feedback from various writing style authors) been told exactly two stories, and I realize both can't be pleased all at once. I will just say this: I...
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    Adding to the very-thin Mecha Genre

    Thank you!! :blob_joy:
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    lol And no rush. If you do let me know and I will return the favor. Gotcha, yeah if its not ultra hardcore RPG elements like RR is famous for, you're definitely good. And no rush whatsoever, was just wanting to toss this out there while it was on my mind.
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    I have done a number of review exchanges before on other sites (namely RR and Tapas) and I kept getting landed with litRPG, romance, or just way out of the way genre writers who didn't like my genre and I didn't, either. It never worked out. :blob_pat_sad: I would like to make an exchange with...
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    Writing How do you plan a very long series?

    Yeah money-makers are pretty much firing from the hip but by authors who are experienced and well versed in that area (whether by skill of writing or skill in gaining the right resources, connections, I don't even know what gets them there in total tbh) For myself, it's currently nearing the...
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    I judge people who . . .

    In that case, I can say I positively judge people who see someone drop something, spill something, or fall in public and they help them rather than look or whip out a phone to record. But for your statement, does that mean you negatively view those who only do so for a year or less?
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    I judge people who . . .

    I judge people who are quick to judge others and do so in an unfair or irrational manner. Don't even have to get to know someone to know who they really are based on that kind of behavior IMO
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    Adding to the very-thin Mecha Genre

    thank you!! :blob_joy:
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    Need advices about the pace of my novel

    I could only add one thing. No one can tell you the proper length as every chapter in a real novel never follows same word count. You end it where it needs to, be it 2.5k today or 4.5k next time followed by a 1.5k. I mean, do what you gotta do. If the story is interesting I think EVERYTHING...
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    Thank you!!

    Thank you!!
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    How is Discord used?

    Yeah you will need to join some servers. If you do a google search you should be able to find a server for for whatever type you are looking for (for example you could find a ton of novel writers' servers etc)
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