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You're right. I just found a few on novel updates that had chapter 0. I guess I'll keep it as prolouge or change it to chapter 0 after seeing how much they afftect the story.

Yeah, but those are webtoon style right? Has there been a novel with chapter 0 before?

so guys, I just realized that people don't generally like prologues and sometimes just skip them. I'm thinking of a dream sequence prologue, should I let it stay as a prologue or in the worst case scenario, what should I name it instead, if I don't want it to be chapter 1?

I just googled gilf, and no, why the hell would I be a gilf lover?

Actually, I'm glad she's not an old lady.

Just imagine, the lady takes her helmet off and you find that she's an old grandma.

Yeah, that could work.

How about TypicalMan?

I like shangaivania better. Anyway, the fight with sans is so hard, I want to just quit.

Completely unrelated, but does anyone here know undertale?

I don't think you can leave a 'state' by yourself, but whatever.

I was so focused on the goat that I missed asking about how you would feel sad if you're dead.

Sorry my bad. I meant the great goat Harry. Are you happy now?

So, you and your family die, but you only have a funeral for your goat. Yeah, makes total sense.

This is actually the first time I started writing, so I knew there would be some problems with it. I'll try my best to get rid of those problems as I keep writing. And another thing, you said that the villain didn't have motives to kill right? I thought horror genres usually keep the motives...

Yeah, I thought that the entire thing just seemed wrong when I reread it again. Thanks for the feedback, it would be better if I just rewrite the whole thing again.

My chapters are a bit short, but I'd like your opinion on them: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/219140-devils-despair/chapter/219183/ https://www.scribblehub.com/read/213599-the-king-of-kings/chapter/215697/